|
Post by kelly1baby on Nov 8, 2005 7:44:49 GMT -5
hey u guys some of u guys might have read this story all ready what happen the girl who wrote this stopped and I continued it but I start from the began
~kelly heart wrote this part~ It was moving day... you and your childhood friends were saying your good-byes. Anyway, lets skip all the boo who crap and lets get to yo new hood. 
You were pulling into your driveway for the first time. You glanced up at the house imagining all sorts of things you would be experiencing here. You get up and take a long, good stretch. The sun felt good on the back of your neck, the air conditioning was getting to you.
Mom: Y/n, come help me with these boxes.
U:aight
You grab a box and some one taps you on your shoulder.
M/v: you need help with that?
You turn around to see the most finest boy you've ever seen.
U: (grins) yeah, i could use it.
M/v: so wus yo name, cuz i'm thinkin i wanna get to know you.
U: Y/n and you?
M/v: Kelly
U: ::laughs::
Kelly: Ay, i know its a girl name but i aint trippin bout it.
Yall are walkin and talkin until voices come from behind yall.
Group of Boys: Heeeey...Kelly you got a new girl huh?
Kelly: (sux teeth) man, w/e...anyway, Y/n these are my brothas...Bryan, Dustin, Carnell, and Patrick.
Dustin is checkin you out and you like it. Kelly see's and he looks a little mad.
Dustin: hope we can be coo'.
U: (smilin and blushin)
Kelly: (sux teeth once again) okay lemme finish up.
Tha boys: we'll help
|
|
|
Post by kelly1baby on Nov 8, 2005 8:10:05 GMT -5
kelly hearts wrote this part
The boys grab the rest of the boxes and place them down in the soon to be living room.
U:So, where do you guys live?
Bryan: next door
U: dang, so i'ma be like da only girl in da neighborhood?
Carnell: no...dese girls named Missy, Ashley, Dina, and Jasmine who lives 'round da corna.
U: (lookin curious) Jasmine who?
Carnell: Jasmine Moore
U: are you serious?
Carnell: (pulls aout his wallet) here's a picture of her.
U: OMG! Yesss!
Bryan: wuts to "yes" about?
U: dats my best friend! I haven't talk to her in only a year but we are still best friends.
Carnell: oh forealz?!
U: MAMA!
Yo ma rushes in da house.
Mom: wuts wrong? Who are these young men?
U: next door neighbors but, do you remember Jasmine?
Mom: yeah
U: she lives around the corner.
Mom: good now you have somebody to be with.
She goes back outside and helps unload the U-Haul truck.
Dustin: well we gon see you around aight, beautiful?
U: aight
Kelly: i'ma stay behind wit her, see yall lata.
Kelly's Thought's: wut tha hell is his f*ckin problem?!
U: have a seat... (pointin on the floor next to the wall)
Kelly: ::laughs::
U: (sittin on the floor) so how old are you?
Kelly: (sits next to her, back against the wall) 16, u?
U: 14
Kelly: a little young
U: young fa wut?
Kelly: to be my girl
U: (smiles)
Kelly: i'm serious
U: oh, well yeah, i guess i can be yo girl
Kelly: so we officially go together?
U: yeah
Kelly: so you mine
U: (laughs) I'm all yours
Kelly: okay (nods head) dats aight
They sit there and talk for hours. But, Y/n has no idea who she's getting to know. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*A Month Later/ July*
You and Jasmine caught up on things and yes, you were still best friends. Dustin was still puttin them moves on you, you really liked him. But nothing could keep you from Kelly now. You and Kelly were even closer to each other and it really seemed like he liked you ALOT, he called you eveyday and was really nice to you. He came over that evening while your Mama was at work. Yall was on yo bed watchin a movie. Kelly wasn't payin no attention though he was starin at you, havin thought runnin through his mind. You just so happen to see him from the corner of your eye.
U: (turns to him) what r u looking at?
Kelly: u
U: why?
Kelly: cuz you so sexy
He stares into your eyes and leans in for his first kiss with you. He climbs on top of you and whispers in your ear.
U: ... i'm a virgin.
Kelly: Wut? Are you serious?
U: (nods head)
Kelly: so do you wanna do it?
U: now?
Kelly: yeah
U: i'm scared
Kelly: i aint gon hurt you
U: you dont know that
Kelly: okay, i'm not gon rush you. I just want some kisses.
He starts to kiss you on yo neck.
U: ::giggles::
Kelly: oh dat tickles huh?
U: ::giggles:: stop
Kelly: nope
You really feel like you wanna do it now cuz he's turnin you on so much. You stop him and get on top of 'em. You lift up his shirt and lick the lining of his eight pac. He gets a little happy somewhere below. (yall know...::snickers:
U: getting a little happy i see.
Kelly: your so good. I dont believe your a virgin now.
U: we have our moments
Kelly: so do you think i'm gon be da one to take yo virginity?
U: ionno...maybe
Kelly: we'll find out sooner or later ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Meanwhile*
Patrick was with his girl, Ashley. They've been together for a year now and they still haven't did anything but kiss. But, i think today was the day they were finally alone in Ashley's house.
|
|
|
Post by ~Mizz~Fizzle~SO~FLy05~ on Nov 8, 2005 13:30:14 GMT -5
bump it up girl i think i remember reading this sumwhere but i like it so far
|
|
|
Post by carnellschica07 on Nov 8, 2005 14:55:38 GMT -5
OMG, this is the story! I was reading this story at breeding5.com
BUMPPPPPPPPPPPPP IT UP!
|
|
|
Post by chelsey on Nov 8, 2005 16:12:50 GMT -5
bumpies
|
|
b5hunni
b5 lover
ILove Carnell
Posts: 98
|
Post by b5hunni on Nov 8, 2005 16:18:02 GMT -5
neva read it but it real good so bump it ^
if its possisble can i be with carnell?
name:jemai nickname:jem, jemmy age:13(can change) personality: sweet, nice, caring...anything u want me to be
|
|
da1gezzie
b5 lover
U a!nt Fr?$h az!m!z
Posts: 98
|
Post by da1gezzie on Nov 9, 2005 10:23:16 GMT -5
b*u*m*p*p*i*e*e*z* ;D
|
|
|
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 9, 2005 18:43:27 GMT -5
Bumpies!
|
|
da1gezzie
b5 lover
U a!nt Fr?$h az!m!z
Posts: 98
|
Post by da1gezzie on Nov 10, 2005 1:41:43 GMT -5
b*u*m*p*z* ;D
|
|
|
Post by kelly1baby on Nov 10, 2005 16:45:22 GMT -5
kelly heart wrote this part also Patrick was with his girl, Ashley. They've been together for a year now and they still haven't did anything but kiss. But, i think today was the day they were finally alone in Ashley's house.
Ashley: ::moans::
Patrick: i'm sorry...i'll slow down...
Ashley: NO! It feels good.
Suddenly, they here a noise comming from downstairs.
Ashley: (sits up) oh no! Get off of me!
She pushes Patrick onto the floor.
Ashley: put on yo clothes! Somebody here!
Patrick quickly stands up and puts on his clothes.
......................................... Mom sticks her head in the door.
Ashley's Mom: hey guys
Patrick: Hi, Mrs. Taylor.
Ashley's Mom: hey Patrick, good to see you again.
Patrick: you too.
She leaves.
Ashley: that was close.
Patrick: a lil too close, next time we at my house.
Ashley:... (thinkin)
Patrick: i know you thinkin bout it.
Ashley: yeah it felt so good.
Patrick smiles... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You and Kelly were walkin back from the pool, when he spotted the ice cream truck and you spotted a girl on her front porch sittin lonely as ever. She's looking at you strangly but then again she keeps lookin at Kelly like he's gonna hurt her. Kelly goes over to the truck. The girl dashes over to you.
U: hey wus your name?
Missy: anyway, no time for that. Leave him now why he's a nice guy.
U: wut are you talkin about
Missy: I'm his ex girlfriend. Please...i almost died because of him.
U: okay, stop lying cuz he's just too sweet for that.
Missy: no please, please. just listen to me. I said I almost DIED!
Kelly glances over at Missy angrily. You had his back towards him and he mouthed something to Missy.
Missy: nooo...just leave him.
U: ur crazy!
Missy: (yelling, pulling her hair) LEAVE NOW! PLEASE PLEASE...LISTEN TO ME!
Suddenly, two guys in all white come from inside of her house.
Guy#1: Missy calm down, calm down...it's gonna be okay.
Guy#2: Just hold on...(sticks a needle in her neck)
Her eyes droop and her head leans forward as if she were sleeping and nothing happened. One of the guys put her in a stray jacket (or hugging jacket) and carries her into the house.
Kelly: wow
U: (turns to Kelly, not knowing he was there) oh, wut happened to her?
Kelly: noody even really knows...one day it was fun ol' Missy that night saw her running to her house limping, the next mornin they took her to da crazy house. But, now she stays back with her mom.
U: wow
Kelly: yup...oh here's your ice cream.
U: thanx ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(Later that night)
You still cant get your mind off of wut happened today.
Y/n's Thought's: i wonder who did it? Why? How could they be so mean?
Her thoughts are interrupted by the ringing of the phone.
U: Hello?
M/v: hey, wut you up to?
U: oh hey Dus...nothin much.
Dustin: oh...well i just called to see if you wus busy
U: nah i'm not busy
Dustin: can i cum over then?
U: yeah...but it's 11:00pm
Dustin: ionno care
U: okay...come on ova
Yall hang up and not even a minute later there's knocking on tha door.
U: come in Dustin
Dustin: wussup girl (giving you a hug)
U: nothing
He's still holdin you, you look up and catch his eyes looking at you...You dont say anything because...you cant. There was a connection between you two. You loved the feelin his light brown eyes put through you. He made chills go down your spine, butterflies in your stomach, and thoughts running throughout your mind. Dustin felt exactly the same way.
|
|
|
Post by ~Mizz~Fizzle~SO~FLy05~ on Nov 10, 2005 19:03:08 GMT -5
bump it up i wonda y she almost died
|
|
|
Post by *~ash042692~* on Nov 10, 2005 20:42:10 GMT -5
This story is really good!!!!.....BUMP!!!!
|
|
|
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 10, 2005 22:43:31 GMT -5
bump it up i wonda y she almost died Yeah, how'd she almost die? Bumpies!
|
|
b5hunni
b5 lover
ILove Carnell
Posts: 98
|
Post by b5hunni on Nov 11, 2005 15:22:43 GMT -5
bump!!! these chapters r too short
|
|
|
Post by kelly1baby on Nov 11, 2005 18:15:57 GMT -5
kelly heart worte this part
Last Time: He's still holdin you, you look up and catch his eyes looking at you...You dont say anything because...you cant. There was a connection between you two. You loved the feelin his light brown eyes put through you. He made chills go down your spine, butterflies in your stomach, and thoughts running throughout your mind. Dustin felt exactly the same way. Now:
Dustin: Man...
U:what?
Dustin: i wish i had you...
U: what do you mean?
Dustin: i wish you was my girl...i'd be wit you 24/7.
U: ::giggles:: i'd like that...
Dustin: so can we run away togetha?
U: you crazy boy...but sadly, i'm only 14.
Dustin: so...3 years, it's legal.
U: wut about Kelly?
Dustin: wut about him?
U: you dont care bout yo brotha's feelin's?
Dustin:(seriously) can i tell you somethin?
U: yeah, sure
Dustin: lets go to yo room and talk about it.
You take his hand and lead him up to yo room. You go sit on the bed wantin to do somethin wit him but, also wanted to hear what he had to tell you. He closes the door behind him and leans back against tha door. He looks at you sexily.
Dustin's Thought's: Damn, my hormones jumpin.
Dustin: i cant take it no mo!
U: I cant either!
You rush to meet each otha in da middle of the room. Yall start to kiss wildly. You both want each other so badly that yall strip each otha quickly. Next thing you know it he's slidin into slowly.
Dustin: you okay?
U: (eyes closed tightly) yeah...just go.
He goes in a little bit more. You bit yo lip and grip da sheets.
Dustin: damn
Yo legs are sqeezin him.
(okay, yall know how da rest goes down)
Dustin:(gets off of you) dat was nice...
U:...i actually liked it.
Dustin: you did?
U: yeah...
Dustin: (turns to you) oh yeah...i still gotta tell you.
U: oh yeah!
Dustin: do you know who Missy is?
U: Yeah, she's dat crazy girl dat got raped right?
Dustin: yeah...(looks away from you, like he doesn't wanna tell anymore)
U: c'mon, spill it out.
Dustin: i...i think Kelly had somethin to do with Missy getting raped.
U: r u serious?
Dustin: yes...i think he did it! Y/n, please just be with me and leave him alone. He has anotha side to him that he hasn't shown you yet. You wont like it.
U: (angry) damn, everybody is tellin me dis sh!t! He's too sweet! You know what? Just get out! Get out! Now!
She throws his clothes out da window.
Dustin: wut did you do that for?
U: because i'm tired of ppl tellin me this! It's not true!
Dustin: man, i still like you but sh!t, right now...f*ck you!
He leaves and puts his clothes on outside your window...he goes home and opens the front door. It's dark...he see's a body figure by the window.
Dustin's Thoughts: Oh hell nah... He searches for the light and flips the switch up. He turns around to see by the window standing, Kelly.
Kelly: why are you coming from Y/n's house this late?
Dustin: just as friends (gets in his face lookin down at him, pointin his finger in his face) and who da hell you think you talkin to, nigg@ you and ma daddy so daont raise yo damn voice up at me.
Kelly: AY, nigga...you betta watch yo self...you'on know who da f*ck you talkin to! I betta not see you comin from ova there at some damn (looks at watch) 3:00 in da motha f*ckin mornin! I'ma let dat sh!t slide tonite!
Dustin: Kelly, wut th...neva mind...i aint got time for yo games. My girl called?
Kelly: nope
Dustin: well i'm bout to go nite-nite, nigg@.
He goes up to his room, jumps in bed and quickly falls asleep.
Meanwhile, your still up thinkin about tha situation that your in. Suddenly, a rock hits your window. You get up from your bed and peek out the window. It's Missy...
|
|
|
Post by kelly1baby on Nov 11, 2005 18:17:31 GMT -5
kelly heart wrote
Last Time:Meanwhile, your still up thinkin about tha situation that your in. Suddenly, a rock hits your window. You get up from your bed and peek out the window. It's Missy...
Now:
U: oh hell nah...it's bout damn 3:00 in da damn mornin. I dont want no crazy girl in ma house. But...nothins gonna happen.
She goes downstairs to open the door.
Missy: I'm sorry fa earlier today...i just wanted to apologize.
U: you remember that?
Missy: yeah...they think that stuff works on me! ::lil laughs::
U: so...did Kelly really do...you know what?
Missy: yeah (starts covering her self up)
U: relax Missy...you are too pretty to be messed up like this. You have to learn to get over it.
Missy: yeah...i'm trying but everytime i see him...i go litterally crazy. I'm sorry, i should go.
U: No...you dont have to.
Missy: well at least leave Kelly alone.
U: ::sighs:: i dunno bout that.
Missy: stop...just stop, you're gonna end up like me.
U: i like Dustin too.
Missy: you know he has a girl, he cant be wit you.
U: WHAT?! He has a girl?!
Missy: yeah...
U: oh hell nah!
Missy: well...i better go before they realize i'm gone.
U: okay
Yall give each other hugs and she leaves. You go up to your room angry and pissed at Dustin. What tha hell was he thinkin?! Was he even gonna tell you? You fall asleep angrily and wake up in the mornin to Kelly right in front of yo face.
Kelly: hey beautiful...
U: where've you been?!
Kelly: next door...at home.
U: i missed you babe.
Kelly: so...wut was you and Dustin doin last night?
U: (suprised that he knows)...um, nothing...just talking about Missy.
Kelly: oh...okay(not believing her)
U: you believe me?
Kelly: yeah(not believing her)...i love you girl.
U: i love you too...you so damn sexy, boy.
Kelly: and i'm all yours.
U: betta be...
Kelly: you betta be all mines. So...you ready cuz i'm kinda horny.
U: i just woke up! Wait til tonite.
Kelly: ::sighs:: (sux teeth) w/e man... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 2:30pm U and Kelly went to da beach with Jasmine.
Jasmine: Ay, yall i'll be back, kay?
Kelly: aight...(watches her @$$ as she walks away)
U: (interruptin him) um...excuse me.
Kelly: (still lookin) huh, babe?
U: stop doin dat sh!t (tuggin his face towards yours)
Kelly: (stands up quick) ay, b!tch! Dont eva do dat! Who you think you is?!
U: yo f*ckin girl!
Kelly: yeah, you always gon be mine but sh!t i'm tired of yo face. I need to look at somethin else besides you.
U: wut is yo f*ckin problem?
Kelly: who is you raisin yo voice at?
U: you punk @$$ b!tch
Kelly: H*e, i run you! You betta shut dat sh!t up before I do you like i did Mis-- neva mind. Just forget about it and lets take a walk to da end of da peire, where nobody's there. I wanna be alone wit you.
U: w/e
He takes yo hand and pulls you down to da peir and pushes you on da ground.
U: ow...your so different now.
Kelly: take yo bathin suit off.
U: no
Kelly: do it!
U: NO!
Kelly: NOW!
U:NO!
Kelly: do it before i make you...
It was somethin in his voice dat made you do it. You were gettin a little afraid of him now. But, you didn't want him to know or he would take TOTAL control over you.
It's so deserted on this side of da beach. Anyway, he gets naked and trys to slide into you.
U: no...i'm not ready.
Kelly: yes you are
U: (your eyes get wide) no...i'm not
Kelly: you are now!
He's in you and bangin you real hard!
U: ::screams:: Kelly...Kelly, stop...it hurts.
Kelly: (covers your mouth) does it :bang: look like :bang: i care.:bang: Just :bang: shut da :bang: hell up.
Meanwhile...
Jasmine comes back to where you and Kelz was supposed to be.
Jasmine: Y/n...Kelly
She looks for you guys. She walks down the beach til there's lesser and lesser people. Until she hears screams. She starts to run towards it.
Jasmine: please dont be, Y/n.
|
|
|
Post by kelly1baby on Nov 11, 2005 18:18:02 GMT -5
Last Time: Jasmine: Y/n...Kelly
She looks for you guys. She walks down the beach til there's lesser and lesser people. Until she hears screams. She starts to run towards it.
Jasmine: please dont be, Y/n.
Now: Jasmine was running like a track star towards the screams. Next thing you know...she caught site of yall.
Jasmine: oh hell nah! (runnin up) Wut da f*ck, boy! Wut da hell is you doin! Get off of her!
As she reach yall, Kelly pulled out of you. You tried to quickly put on your bathin suit and cover up with a towel.
Kelly: i told you to shut da f*ck up, didn't I?!
U: (silence)
Y/n's Thought's: He just raped me...
Kelly: ay, b!tch answer me.
U: (whispering) you just raped me.
Jasmine: (gets out her cell) I'm callin da cops.
Kelly: no da hell you aint!
Jasmine: why i aint?!
Kelly: see wut happen...
Jasmine: (stops)
Kelly: thought so... Y/n, come on.
U: no
Kelly: remember wut happened last time you said no?
U: no...RUN!
Jasmine and Y/n run as fast as yall can all the way to yo house. You open tha door, slam it, and lock it. Soon as you turn around...Dustin's sittin on yo sofa, waitin on you.
Jasmine: maybe i should go...
U: no...(whispers) kelly's out there.
Dustin: i'm still here...
Jasmine: I can run girl...dont worry. I'll call you.
U: PLEASE, be careful.
Jasmine leaves and Dustin grbs you from behind.
U: get off of me!
Dustin: wuts yo problem?
U: do you know wut just hjappened to me?! Do you have any idea?!
Dustin: wut bad could happen in tha day time?
U: yo brotha just raped me...
|
|
|
Post by luckie09 on Nov 11, 2005 18:18:46 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]BUMP IT HIGHA[/glow]
|
|
|
Post by kelly1baby on Nov 11, 2005 18:19:08 GMT -5
The last thing kelly heart wrote then the rest from me
Last Time:
Dustin: wuts yo problem?
U: do you know wut just hjappened to me?! Do you have any idea?!
Dustin: wut bad could happen in tha day time?
U: yo brotha just raped me...
Now:
Dustin: ...you lying!
Y/n: (shakes her head)
Dustin: OMG (hugs you) i'm sorry.
Y/n: well it happened aight.
Dustin: i'll be back.
He walks out and comes back an hour later.
Y/n: wut did you do to him?
Dustin: nothin...
Y/n: nothing?
Dustin: well, i did somethin but i cant tell you.
Y/n: speaking of cant tell you...why didn't you tell me about yo girlfriend, KeKe?!
Dustin: ...
Y/n: Nigg@ yo was tryna get wit me and you had a girl?! Even if i did go wit you i probaly couldn't even trust you, just because of dat!
Dustin: i'm sorry...i'm so sorry. Can we start over?
Y/n: there's no startin over...you did wut you did.
Dustin: but, y/n...i really care about you.
|
|
|
Post by luckie09 on Nov 11, 2005 18:20:55 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]BUMP IT UP GIRLY[/glow]
|
|
|
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 11, 2005 18:24:29 GMT -5
Bumpies!!
|
|
|
Post by ~Mizz~Fizzle~SO~FLy05~ on Nov 11, 2005 19:10:53 GMT -5
omg bump it up u make me wanan cry KELLY IS A PEACE OF SHIT MAN lol u making me not like him HAHA
|
|
|
Post by giggles on Nov 11, 2005 19:11:15 GMT -5
Bump this up!!!!!!!!!!!
|
|
|
Post by *~ash042692~* on Nov 12, 2005 7:32:25 GMT -5
BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
|
|
|
Post by kelly1baby on Nov 12, 2005 8:44:43 GMT -5
now lets really get into the story from now till the end of the story I wrote so enjoy
recap Y/n: Nigg@ yo was tryna get wit me and you had a girl?! Even if i did go wit you i probaly couldn't even trust you, just because of dat!
Dustin: i'm sorry...i'm so sorry. Can we start over?
Y/n: there's no startin over...you did wut you did.
Dustin: but, y/n...i really care about you. end recap y/n: save it I don't want to hear it i'm out. you walk out the house mad that was some bull crap he tried to pull as u were walking to ur front door u were abou to open it until u saw kelly limping and he looked mad. kelly: b*tch u thought u could get away right by getting my brother to hurt me but u thought wrong. y/n: wh-what are u talking about. he grabbed ur hair u wince in paing kelly: don't play stupid were going to finish what we left off at the beach. he dragged u inside u put up a fight but he was just to strong. U got out of his grip some how but he caught u kelly: don't ever try that agian but u weren't going to stop u kicked and cried u took a vase u try to hit him but u miss this only mad he even madder kelly: what did I just tell now u going to learn. He took u an beat u until u couldn't take it. U crawled into the cornor and scrunched urslef into a ball and cried. u just gave up. kelly: see what did I tell u now ur going to give it to me and I mean now. He took u and through u over his shoulder and he open ur bedroom kelly:I've been waiting for this. Don't even try it cause I know last night my brother was here and what yaw did its my turn. He ripped ur shirt. U try to cover but it was no use. he took off his pants and his boxers and he took ur clothes off. and he enter into u slowly. u toss and turn until u couldn't take anymore and just surrender . *were going to skip the rest of the detials* you wake up ur eyes hurt from crying. You turn ur head to see kelly sleeping next to u. U looked at him with disgust U thought things couldn't get worse but u were wrong. ur phone rang at first u ignor it then it rangs agian. u pick up y/n: hello f/v: hey honey y/n: hey mom when ur coming home mom: about that not for a while y/n: why?
2bc how come ur mom is not coming home
|
|