Post by lo26 on Nov 1, 2005 0:27:14 GMT -5
:: :: - means the character is talkin
* *- means the this is wat the character is thinking or doing
( )- means the narrator (me) is talkin
Y/n-*As I walked towards the door I heard anonymous loud moans come from the other side of the door. Now I didn't know who this pregnant dog was but when opened that door I was gone kick both of they ass. I slowly reached for the door knob as my heart began to race and my anger formed into rage.I couldn't take this feeling any longer I had to know who she was, and I had to make the both of them sufer.*
(but in order to tell you this story I would have to start from the begining)
(1 year ago)
Patrick & Y/n- * makin out with each other on y/n's couch*
Patrick- ::when yo moms comin home::
Y/n- ::she normally would be here by now but she said she'd be late tonight..... why?::
Patrick-:: cus you know yo moms don't like me in her house when she aint here... she don't like me when I'm not here::* her mom hated me and all other boys, she treat y/n like a baby... like y/n don't know how to handle herself*
Y/n- :: well you don't gotta worry bout her cus she gone be late 2night::
Patrick- :: good:: * picks you up and puts you over his shoulder and starts carrying you up stairs to yo room. He puts you on top of yo bed and starts kissin you*
( THE PHONE RINGS)
Patrick- * stops and looks at the blue phone next to yo bed*
Y/n-::don't worry about that it's probably not important and if it is they'll leave a message::
Patrick-* slightly smirks and then starts kissing you on yo neck*
Y/m's P.O.V.
Y/m-* I wonder why she not answering she probably gone over that boys house....o well I was hopin that we could've did a mother daughter saturday like we used to thats the only reason why I decided to leave work earlier than I said I would*
ok thats chaperter 1 part 1 so wat u think sorry so short
If yall bump alot I'll write chapter2 part 1 tonite
so it's yall choice bumpz or dumpz
(oh yea did I mention this is my first story so go easy on me)
Replay::
Y/m-* I wonder why she not answering she probably gone over that boys house....o well I was hopin that we could've did a mother daughter saturday like we used to thats the only reason why I decided to leave work earlier than I said I would*
Chapter 2
Y/n's P.O.V
Y/n-* now they got both of they shirts off and you don't have on a bra... u wondering why do u got a bad feeling about it cus u want to do it but for sum reason it don't feel right... oh well its probably nuthin*
Patrick-:: you ok::
y/n-:: yea... why you ask::
Patrick-:: cus you look nervous::
Y/m P.O.V
Y/m- * now in side of the house goin upstairs to see if you there* ::Y/n are you-:: opens the bedroom door and sees Patrick on top of you, both of yall half naked* :: what the f%@#::
Patrick- * hurrys up and gets off of you reaching for his clothes and tries to run pass y/m* (notice I said tries)
Y/m- * grabbed Patrick by his arm tight* :: where you think you goin::
Y/n-:: leave hime alone:: * puts on your shirt*
Y/m-* let him go* :: you you think you talkin to::
Patrick-* tries to walk out unnoticed*
Y/m-:: don't you take another step.... now where do you stay at little boy::
Patrick-* sence she didn't know ran as fast as he could out the front door*
Y/m-:: YEA YOU BETTA RUN!!!::* points to y/n* and you-::
Y/n- ::what!!:: * mad that she treat you like a baby*
Y/m-::you need to get yo fast ass off boys and into them books::
Y/n-:; I'm not fast and I can do what ever I want::
Y/m-:: not in my house... and you can't see him any more I don't want you to see any other little boys no more::
Y/n- :: they not little.... and I'd rather be talkin to boys then lonely like you!!!-
(wack!!)
Y/n- *you felt the side of your face burning as your head flew to the side you realized that your mother smacked the s#@! out of you.... you don't know what got into you but the next thing you knew you and your momma was fighting each other like people off the streets*
Y/m-* had you up against the wall and started choking you so you couldn't move* :: stop strugglin you makin it worst::
Y/n-*I decided to mess with her a little* :: go to hell::
Y/m-* let you go* :: get out since you think you grown.... find some where else to sleep tonight!!
Y/n-* you got up and slowly walked out your house you knew where you were goin... what are friends for any way... you walked to Naira's house since you knew thats where every body stayed at on saturday nights.... you rang the door bell and started fixin your hair since y/m messed it up*
Naira-*opened the door and looked you up and down* :: d**n what happened to you, yo face all red:: *she opened the door wider signaling you that you could come in*
Y/n-*you walked in* ;:I got into it with my moms....she kicked me out.....can I stay here tonight
Naira-:: yea u can stay....but why was yall fightin....::
Y/n-::I'll tell you lata...where every body at?::
Naira-:: down stairs:: * yall both walk down stairs and you see Patrick and every body else sitting on her couches and chairs*
Rina-:: d**n gurl what happened....it look like sumbody whooped yo A@#::
Stephanie-::dang you ok who was you fightin::
Karen:: yo face red and you got a brouse on yo arm
Y/n-:: well since yall must know.....
(2 hour lata)
B5-::iight yall we gotta go but we'll see yall tomorrow
Patrick-:: I'm sorry about what happened-
Y/n-:: its iiight *kisses him*
All of B5 except Patrick- *starts leavin*
Dustin- :: Pat hurry up or we gon leave you::
Patrick::iight!! * kisses you and gives you a hug then leaves
ok thats chapter 2 chapter3 comin tomorrow
Replay::
Y/n-*answered it* ::hello......now.........why........... r u serious (you could tell by her voice she was sad/worried/mad)....... well I'm not stayin there......I don't care if it's for a day I'm not goin....:: *hung up the phone*
*Click*
Y/n-::stupid b%^&*....::*had a sad look on her face............
Patrick-:: y/n whats wrong?.....
Chapter 5 ~~~~a years pasted goodbye
Y/n-:: that was my mom.....she sendin me away to my dad's house
Patrick-:;for how long..
Y/n-:: a year...*starts to cry a little*
Stephanie-::why, when::
y/n-::she said so I could get some disipline...and i'M leavin tomorrow::*starts to cry more putting her hand over her face
Patrick-*scoots closer to you and starts to hug you d**n her moms is bogish*
y/n-::I got to go home and get ready cause my plane is at 8:50 she said she already got the ticket and all I need to do is pack
Patrick-::you want me to walk you home::
y/n-::yea::
Both-*walk to y/n's house and stand on the door step*
Patrick-::so what time you think you leavin::
y/n-::I'm leavin here at 7:00::
Patrick-::man why won't yo momma leave us alone::
Y/n-::I dont kno ever sence my dad spit she been actin weird::
Patrick-::you know I love you right::
y/n-::yea I love you too....*starts to cry again*::i guess this is goodbye::
Patrick-::yea I guess so....::*he hugs you then gives you the best/longest kiss you ever had in your life*::bye::
y/n-:: see you in a year:: *walks in the house and closes the door then leans back on the door and starts to cry*
(lemme speed it up a little next night)
y/n-*you arrive at your dad's house and haven't said a word sence you left your house that morning*
(ima speed it up alot..........over a year this has been you diary)
day 34 Dear Diary,
I talked to Patrick to day he says him and everyone else misses me . I am doin ok out here but it's boring it's not the same as home
day91 Dear Diary
I haven't talked to Patrick in a while but when I do he is always busy or about to go some where. Alot of boyz here have been askin meet out but I could never cheat on Patrick he was my first and my only love. Naira,Rina, Cat, Karen,& Stephanie haven't seen much of Patrick either every time they are over there he is at one of his friends house or locked in his room.
day 203 Dear diary
I know I don't write much but in 162 days I'll be back home I sorta like it here but it still doesn't compare to being with Patrick and my friends. Day after day I have to pretend like I hate it here to put guilt on my mom and so far it's workin I might be comin home early.
day292 Dear Diary
I was suppose to be here for another 2 months and a half but my mom said I could come next week but I'm not telling anyone else so it'll be a surprise.
day 302 Dear Diary
I'mleaving for home tomorrow morning and I should be there at about 12:45 in the afternoon and straight after that I'm goin over Patrick's house to see him....I can't wait!!!
comin 2 morrow chapter6 a fallen relationship
Replay::
day 302 Dear Diary
I'mleaving for home tomorrow morning and I should be there at about 12:45 in the afternoon and straight after that I'm goin over Patrick's house to see him....I can't wait!!!
Cahpter 6 A fallen relationship
(the next afternoon around 12:45)
y/n-*walked off the plane and went straight to the luggage claim and got your bags (the rest of your stuff still at your dad's house) then you waited out side, when you saw your moms car you still couldn't believe you were almost home*
y/m-*got out of the car and gave you a hug you were not feelin the love* ::y/n I missed you so much...I'll never do that to you again::
y/n-::I missed you too::*yea right lets go with that lie*
(30 min lata you were pulling up in the driveway)
y/n-*with out thinking twice after yall parked you ran straight to Patrick's house as you aprouched the door you started makin sure you looked fine then you rang the door bell*
Dustin-*answered the door he couldn't believe it sence you were like his little sister* ::y/n.....*he gave you a big hug*::what r u doin here you not supposed to be back til next week::
Y/n-::my moms let me come home early cuss I think she was lonely.....where's Patrick::*both of yall walked in the house*
Dustin-::he's upstairs let me go get him::
Y/n-::naw let me get him I don't want him to expect that any one else is here::
Dustin-:..k::*but you were allready runing up the stairs *
Y/n-*you took a deep breath and knocked on the door.....*
Patrick-*opened the door all wet with a towel wrapped around his lower body (ooh wee I can see it now) he looked stunned*
Y/n-*hugged him so fast and started to kiss him*
Patrick-::wat are you doin here::
Y/n-::my mom said I could come home early:: *you walked in and sat on the bed* ::so here I am::
Patrick-*sat next to you* :h well I was just about to go with my friends...... but we can spend some time with each other tomorrow::
Y/n-*some great bf I have I haven't seen him in a year and he can't post pon one day with his friends to spend time with me*:k well I'll see you tomorrow.....*gives him a big kiss and leaves*
(next morning around 9:00)
Y/n-* sprung by T-pain started playin on your cell phone so you knew it was Pat you answered it and he told you that every body was gone be comin over your house sence yo moms was at work*
( they came to your house at about 10:45 a.m.)
Everybody-*gave you extra big hugs includin some pple that you haven't seen in a very long time Yolanda aka Londa and Dominique aka Nique you normally only was friends with them in school and only school*
Nique and Londa-::we missed you at school last year::
y/n*walked to the couch and sat by Patrick and kissed him*
Nique-*gave you a look because in 8th grade Pat and her had alittle thing for each other*
Y/n-*looked at Nique with that pregnant dog don't start look* :: so wat we gone do today::
Patrick-::you juss got back so it's up 2 you::
Y/n-:k first I wanna go to the movies then to the mall then do wateva::
(ok once again gonna speed this up to after everyone else was leave)
Patrick-*stayed there with you and once again you are sitting on the couch making out*
Y/n-::what are you doing tomorrow::
Patrick-::I dont have any thing planned but something might come up::
Y/n-::what's wrong with you today....you're acting weird::
Patrick-:;how am I acting weird::
Y/n-:;you just are::
(the next day)
Y/n-*got up and dressed and walked to Patrick's house she rang the door bell*
Bryan-*answered the door already knowing wat you wanted*::Patrick is in his room::
Y/n-*you walked in and knock on his door*
Patrick-*opened the door* :h hey baby I was just about to leave:: *he tried to kiss you but you walked passed him into his room*
Y/n-::Patrick I have to ask you a question...::*sounding worried*..are you cheating on me...::
Patrick-::no why::*gettin defensive*
Y/n-::where you been goin... and why don't know body else know where you go.....I know you not hangin out with friends....why won't you tell me the truth
(end of chapter 6 chapter 7 arguin again..... comin soon and chapter 10 iz the last chapter for part 1)
Patrick-*opened the door* :h hey baby I was just about to leave:: *he tried to kiss you but you walked passed him into his room*
Y/n-::Patrick I have to ask you a question...::*sounding worried*..are you cheating on me...::
Patrick-::no why::*gettin defensive*
Y/n-::where you been goin... and why don't know body else know where you go.....I know you not hangin out with friends....why won't you tell me the truth
Chapter 7 Arguing Again
Patrick-::I am telling you the truth:: *starts to stare in your eyes*
Y/n-::are you really:: *looks into his eyes thinking this is sum bull s#$%*
Patrick-::yes I am...I could never cheat on you.....I love you too much....and you kno that:: *he started leaning in for the kiss*
Y/n-:: some how I don't believe that nuts::
Patrick-*stoped and backed off* ::you don't beleive me...well fine then you don't have to::
Y/n-:$@# straight I don't::*yall both started to yell at each other*
Patrick-:: I don't know what the f%^* is wrong with you but-::
Y/n-::ain't nuthing wrong with me but you need to check yo self cuss you must not remember who you talkin to::
Patrick-:: oh I don't know who I'm talkin to......:: *takes a deep breath to calm himself down*:: ... you know what.....I'm not about to sit here and argue wit you about stupid s#*@:: * he turned to the door and walked out of the room*
Y/n-*you yanked him back in the room and slammed the door so yall could talk* ::you ain't goin know where until we solve this::
Patrick-::b&*^# I'll go where ever I please::
Y/n-::b&*^#.....I'm a b&#@%.....:: *you smacked the taste out of his mouth..* ::ngga I got yo b&^%:; *you smacked him again*
Patrick-::Y/N I'M WANRNING YOU.....NOT TO HIT ME AGAIN::*he tried to grab your arms to stop you from hitting him again*
Y/n-*you pushed him to the wall* ::don't f^&*ing touch me:: *you smack the s$#% out of him::
Patrick-*punched you like you was a dude*
Y/n-*you fell to the ground holding your eye crying*
Patrick-*held his hand over his mouth at the site of what he did and fell on the ground beside you* ::y/n I didn't mean to...and you were juss...:: *he tried to help you up but you pushed him away*
Y/n-:: Just leave me alone Patrick::
Patrick-*stopped touchin you*::I'm sorry....y/n..baby::
Y/n- ::get away from me:: *you rush to your feet and went into the bathroom and slammed the door... you looked in the mirror and noticed your eye was purple soon to be a black eye*
Patick-*knocked on the door* ::y/n baby.... you ok....If you want me to leave I will.... ok then I'm gone:: *he left slowly and went to his "friend's house"*
Y/n-*oh nuts I can't go home like this*
( I know what your thinking ch.7 is short but I'm gonna write ch.8 tonite so stay tuned cuss you never kno when it just might come)
Replay::
Patrick-*stopped touchin you*::I'm sorry....y/n..baby::
Y/n- ::get away from me:: *you rush to your feet and went into the bathroom and slammed the door... you looked in the mirror and noticed your eye was purple soon to be a black eye*
Patick-*knocked on the door* ::y/n baby.... you ok....If you want me to leave I will.... ok then I'm gone:: *he left slowly and went to his "friend's house"*
Y/n-*oh nuts I can't go home like this*
Chapter 8 wtf is wrong with you
y/n- *u were standing infront of on Naira's house waiting for someone to answer the door, you were crying, and you couldn't tell your mother whathad happened so you decided to seek help from a friend*
Naira's POV
(ding dong)
Naira-*in her room with Dustin pickin out an outfit 4 yall double date with Rina and Kelly who was waiting in the next room for yall*
Kelly-*your door was opened so he walked right in* ::wats takin you so long::
Rina-*walked in your room with y/n nobody else noticed yet* ::Naira Y/n's here::
Naira-*turned around from her closet to see y/n crying* ::Y/n what happened....whats wrong::
Rina-*gently pushed Y/n face toward them so they could see*
Dustin-*was sitting on the bed hopped up imediately* ::who did that to you::
Kelly-:h s%^$ thats f$%&ed up....what happened::
Rina-::Patrick knocked the f#$^ out of her like she was a dude that's what::
Naira-::are you f%$^ing serious ......c'mon so I can go bust this nigga's head wide open::
Dustin and Kelly-::wtf are you serious....::
Kelly-::Patrick did this to you?::
Y/n-:: but I hit him first::
Dustin-::btu that dont give him kno d$@! excuse to be hittin you like that-::
Rina-::he shouldn't be touchin her at all:: *grabbs you and starts to drag you out the front door every body else follows*
Naira-::where he at....is he still home::
Dustin-:: text him
(text)
D-Where you at
P-I'm almost home
D-How far from home
P-about two houses away....how far u from home
D- a block a way but i'll be there soon
P- iight
(end of text)
Every body-* yall got to the house and walked in only to see Patrick sittin on the couch*
Patrick-*jumped up quick as hell*
Rina-*put you infront of her and asked* ::wat the f!@# is this:: *pointing to your eye*
Dustin-*punched Patrick in his eye b4 he got to say anything* ::how you like that::
Kelly-:@#$ D calm down:: *pullin Dustin back, who was lookin like he was up for hittin Pat again*
Naira-::you think this sh$# is funny::
Patrick- *got up to his feet*
Rina-::answer the d@!* question::
Patrick-*didn't answer*
Rina-:;he think this is funny:: * Rina and Naira got that look on they face like they knew what one and othe was thinking*
Both-*all of the sudden just started beatin the nuts out of Patrick*
Y/n-::stop....::
Patrick-*on the ground bein stomp*
Kelly and Dustin-*grabbed them both off of Patrick* ::iight thats enough::
Rina-::you don't like it when it's you do you huh:: *smilin at Pat who was tryna get up*
Naira-::c'mon y/n and Rina we don't wanna risk gettin our a** beat by a b^%&* like him
Replay::
Y/n-::stop....::
Patrick-*on the ground bein stomp*
Kelly and Dustin-*grabbed them both off of Patrick* ::iight thats enough::
Rina-::you don't like it when it's you do you huh:: *smilin at Pat who was tryna get up*
Naira-::c'mon y/n and Rina we don't wanna risk gettin our a** beat by a b^%&* like him
Chapter 9 A time to forgive or hate
Y/n-*following Naira and Rina out the door after lookin at Patrick who was gettin up with the help of Dustin and Kelly who probably just wanted to leave him there and probably would've if that weren't their brother.....yall finally got out the door*::why yall have to do him like that::
Naira-::because he did you like that:: *once again pointin to your eye*
Y/n-::but he didn't mean it + I hit him first:: *yall walkin towards Naira's house*
(yall get to Naira's house and you once again spend the night over there....Next Morning)
Y/n-*in the bathroom tryna figure out how u gone hide your black eye*
Naira and Stephanie-*walk in with a bag*
Stephanie-::are you ok.... lemme see.....I'ma beat his azz-::
Y/n-::Rina and Naira handled that so pleaz don't even say nothin bout it to him::
Stephanie-*handing you the bag*:k I won't::*you knew she was lying*
Y/n-::whats this::
Rina-*walked in* ::somethin to cover up yo eye::
Y/n-::thanx:: *this is what made them your best friends they always had yo back and you always had theres*
Cat and Karen-*walked in*
Cat-::you ok...lemme see:: (sound familiar it should)
Karen-::what happened...::
(4 hours later)
Y/n-:k how do it look::
Stephanie-::it dont really show but it look a little puffy especially if you lookin closely::
Karen-::mabe yo mom won't notice::
Cat-::course she gone notice if we notice it still her mom should all moms notice everything::
Y/n-::well I gotta go home I'll jus try to avoid her:;
(speed it up Y/n 2 house down frm hers then she notices Pat yellin at your window)
Patrick-::Y/n.....I kno you mad at me but we need to talk..........I need you baby.............I'm sorry and I'll never treat you like that again::
Y/n-*u came up behind him quietly* ::who you talkin to.::
Patrick-*turned around*::y/n...these are for you:: *he had flowers but you hadn't noticed them before he'd handed them to you* ::y/n baby...I'm sorry....I-::
Y/n-::no I should be sorry I hit you first:; *you kissed him and started inside your house*
Patrick-::wait... Y/n does that mean you forgive me::
Y/n-::yea::
Patrick-::I love you more than living itself::*gave you a long passionate kiss*
Y/n-::I gotta go in the house::
Patrick-:: yo momma aint here so can I come in....::
Y/n-*with a face like that how could you say kno* ::yea::
(yall walked upstairs to your room and had make up sex then)
{to be continued till lata on 2 nite because there is more of ch.8}
Replay::
Patrick-:: yo momma aint here so can I come in....::
Y/n-*with a face like that how could you say kno* ::yea::
(yall walked upstairs to your room and had make up sex then)
Contiued.....Ch. 9 A time to forgive or hate
Y/n-*stood up putin your clothes on Patrick was still laying on your bed (ooh lemme try to vision a naked Patrick.....wow...words can't express wat I'm thinkin)
Patrick-*got up and also started getting dressed then when you were putting on your shirt an already dressed Pat hugged you from behind* ::soo........how was it::
Y/n-::it was good but you weren't bad either.....::
Patrick andY/n-*started laughing*
Patrick-::you got jokes huh::
Y/n-*jokes that would embarrass yo ass* ::that's just how I feel today::
Patrick-*started kissin you on yo neck*
(ding dong)
Y/n-::go down stairs and answer the door and act like nothin happened::
Patrick-::what if it's yo momma::
Y/n-::why would my momma use the door bell::*u sprayed him with air freshiner* (gotta get that smell out)
Patrick-*went down stairs to answer the door*
Y/n-* you sprayed the room with air freshiner and sprayed yourself with perfume then you walked down stairs and saw Nique and Pat siting on the couch*
Nique-::hey...I jus came here 2 ask you to come 2my party 2nite::
Y/n-::yea....I'll be there::
Nique-k see yall tonite then....oh yea and that perfume only make it more obvious::*she walked out and only after 2 min....*
(pat cell ohone rang)
Patrick-*looked at his cell phone* ::I gotta go::
Y/n-*puppy dog eyes* ::already?::
Patrick-::yea but I'll make it up to u:: *kisses you* ::I promise::*he leaves*
Y/n-*wait a min. Nique and Pat had a thing for each other in 8th grade that pregnant dog all the sudden real cool wit us...and as soon as she left here he just happened to have to go he cheatin on me with that ugly hefer*
(is that how you spell hefer(lol)
(yo cell started ringing you answered it)
Y/n-hello
Stephanie-Y/N.....I'm down the street from Pat's house and...and...
Y/n- *worried* ::and what::
Stephanie- gurl.................. he cheatin on you
(ok stay tuned tommorow 4 ch.10 blow out at Pat's house)
* *- means the this is wat the character is thinking or doing
( )- means the narrator (me) is talkin
Y/n-*As I walked towards the door I heard anonymous loud moans come from the other side of the door. Now I didn't know who this pregnant dog was but when opened that door I was gone kick both of they ass. I slowly reached for the door knob as my heart began to race and my anger formed into rage.I couldn't take this feeling any longer I had to know who she was, and I had to make the both of them sufer.*
(but in order to tell you this story I would have to start from the begining)
(1 year ago)
Patrick & Y/n- * makin out with each other on y/n's couch*
Patrick- ::when yo moms comin home::
Y/n- ::she normally would be here by now but she said she'd be late tonight..... why?::
Patrick-:: cus you know yo moms don't like me in her house when she aint here... she don't like me when I'm not here::* her mom hated me and all other boys, she treat y/n like a baby... like y/n don't know how to handle herself*
Y/n- :: well you don't gotta worry bout her cus she gone be late 2night::
Patrick- :: good:: * picks you up and puts you over his shoulder and starts carrying you up stairs to yo room. He puts you on top of yo bed and starts kissin you*
( THE PHONE RINGS)
Patrick- * stops and looks at the blue phone next to yo bed*
Y/n-::don't worry about that it's probably not important and if it is they'll leave a message::
Patrick-* slightly smirks and then starts kissing you on yo neck*
Y/m's P.O.V.
Y/m-* I wonder why she not answering she probably gone over that boys house....o well I was hopin that we could've did a mother daughter saturday like we used to thats the only reason why I decided to leave work earlier than I said I would*
ok thats chaperter 1 part 1 so wat u think sorry so short
If yall bump alot I'll write chapter2 part 1 tonite
so it's yall choice bumpz or dumpz
(oh yea did I mention this is my first story so go easy on me)
Replay::
Y/m-* I wonder why she not answering she probably gone over that boys house....o well I was hopin that we could've did a mother daughter saturday like we used to thats the only reason why I decided to leave work earlier than I said I would*
Chapter 2
Y/n's P.O.V
Y/n-* now they got both of they shirts off and you don't have on a bra... u wondering why do u got a bad feeling about it cus u want to do it but for sum reason it don't feel right... oh well its probably nuthin*
Patrick-:: you ok::
y/n-:: yea... why you ask::
Patrick-:: cus you look nervous::
Y/m P.O.V
Y/m- * now in side of the house goin upstairs to see if you there* ::Y/n are you-:: opens the bedroom door and sees Patrick on top of you, both of yall half naked* :: what the f%@#::
Patrick- * hurrys up and gets off of you reaching for his clothes and tries to run pass y/m* (notice I said tries)
Y/m- * grabbed Patrick by his arm tight* :: where you think you goin::
Y/n-:: leave hime alone:: * puts on your shirt*
Y/m-* let him go* :: you you think you talkin to::
Patrick-* tries to walk out unnoticed*
Y/m-:: don't you take another step.... now where do you stay at little boy::
Patrick-* sence she didn't know ran as fast as he could out the front door*
Y/m-:: YEA YOU BETTA RUN!!!::* points to y/n* and you-::
Y/n- ::what!!:: * mad that she treat you like a baby*
Y/m-::you need to get yo fast ass off boys and into them books::
Y/n-:; I'm not fast and I can do what ever I want::
Y/m-:: not in my house... and you can't see him any more I don't want you to see any other little boys no more::
Y/n- :: they not little.... and I'd rather be talkin to boys then lonely like you!!!-
(wack!!)
Y/n- *you felt the side of your face burning as your head flew to the side you realized that your mother smacked the s#@! out of you.... you don't know what got into you but the next thing you knew you and your momma was fighting each other like people off the streets*
Y/m-* had you up against the wall and started choking you so you couldn't move* :: stop strugglin you makin it worst::
Y/n-*I decided to mess with her a little* :: go to hell::
Y/m-* let you go* :: get out since you think you grown.... find some where else to sleep tonight!!
Y/n-* you got up and slowly walked out your house you knew where you were goin... what are friends for any way... you walked to Naira's house since you knew thats where every body stayed at on saturday nights.... you rang the door bell and started fixin your hair since y/m messed it up*
Naira-*opened the door and looked you up and down* :: d**n what happened to you, yo face all red:: *she opened the door wider signaling you that you could come in*
Y/n-*you walked in* ;:I got into it with my moms....she kicked me out.....can I stay here tonight
Naira-:: yea u can stay....but why was yall fightin....::
Y/n-::I'll tell you lata...where every body at?::
Naira-:: down stairs:: * yall both walk down stairs and you see Patrick and every body else sitting on her couches and chairs*
Rina-:: d**n gurl what happened....it look like sumbody whooped yo A@#::
Stephanie-::dang you ok who was you fightin::
Karen:: yo face red and you got a brouse on yo arm
Y/n-:: well since yall must know.....
(2 hour lata)
B5-::iight yall we gotta go but we'll see yall tomorrow
Patrick-:: I'm sorry about what happened-
Y/n-:: its iiight *kisses him*
All of B5 except Patrick- *starts leavin*
Dustin- :: Pat hurry up or we gon leave you::
Patrick::iight!! * kisses you and gives you a hug then leaves
ok thats chapter 2 chapter3 comin tomorrow
Replay::
Y/n-*answered it* ::hello......now.........why........... r u serious (you could tell by her voice she was sad/worried/mad)....... well I'm not stayin there......I don't care if it's for a day I'm not goin....:: *hung up the phone*
*Click*
Y/n-::stupid b%^&*....::*had a sad look on her face............
Patrick-:: y/n whats wrong?.....
Chapter 5 ~~~~a years pasted goodbye
Y/n-:: that was my mom.....she sendin me away to my dad's house
Patrick-:;for how long..
Y/n-:: a year...*starts to cry a little*
Stephanie-::why, when::
y/n-::she said so I could get some disipline...and i'M leavin tomorrow::*starts to cry more putting her hand over her face
Patrick-*scoots closer to you and starts to hug you d**n her moms is bogish*
y/n-::I got to go home and get ready cause my plane is at 8:50 she said she already got the ticket and all I need to do is pack
Patrick-::you want me to walk you home::
y/n-::yea::
Both-*walk to y/n's house and stand on the door step*
Patrick-::so what time you think you leavin::
y/n-::I'm leavin here at 7:00::
Patrick-::man why won't yo momma leave us alone::
Y/n-::I dont kno ever sence my dad spit she been actin weird::
Patrick-::you know I love you right::
y/n-::yea I love you too....*starts to cry again*::i guess this is goodbye::
Patrick-::yea I guess so....::*he hugs you then gives you the best/longest kiss you ever had in your life*::bye::
y/n-:: see you in a year:: *walks in the house and closes the door then leans back on the door and starts to cry*
(lemme speed it up a little next night)
y/n-*you arrive at your dad's house and haven't said a word sence you left your house that morning*
(ima speed it up alot..........over a year this has been you diary)
day 34 Dear Diary,
I talked to Patrick to day he says him and everyone else misses me . I am doin ok out here but it's boring it's not the same as home
day91 Dear Diary
I haven't talked to Patrick in a while but when I do he is always busy or about to go some where. Alot of boyz here have been askin meet out but I could never cheat on Patrick he was my first and my only love. Naira,Rina, Cat, Karen,& Stephanie haven't seen much of Patrick either every time they are over there he is at one of his friends house or locked in his room.
day 203 Dear diary
I know I don't write much but in 162 days I'll be back home I sorta like it here but it still doesn't compare to being with Patrick and my friends. Day after day I have to pretend like I hate it here to put guilt on my mom and so far it's workin I might be comin home early.
day292 Dear Diary
I was suppose to be here for another 2 months and a half but my mom said I could come next week but I'm not telling anyone else so it'll be a surprise.
day 302 Dear Diary
I'mleaving for home tomorrow morning and I should be there at about 12:45 in the afternoon and straight after that I'm goin over Patrick's house to see him....I can't wait!!!
comin 2 morrow chapter6 a fallen relationship
Replay::
day 302 Dear Diary
I'mleaving for home tomorrow morning and I should be there at about 12:45 in the afternoon and straight after that I'm goin over Patrick's house to see him....I can't wait!!!
Cahpter 6 A fallen relationship
(the next afternoon around 12:45)
y/n-*walked off the plane and went straight to the luggage claim and got your bags (the rest of your stuff still at your dad's house) then you waited out side, when you saw your moms car you still couldn't believe you were almost home*
y/m-*got out of the car and gave you a hug you were not feelin the love* ::y/n I missed you so much...I'll never do that to you again::
y/n-::I missed you too::*yea right lets go with that lie*
(30 min lata you were pulling up in the driveway)
y/n-*with out thinking twice after yall parked you ran straight to Patrick's house as you aprouched the door you started makin sure you looked fine then you rang the door bell*
Dustin-*answered the door he couldn't believe it sence you were like his little sister* ::y/n.....*he gave you a big hug*::what r u doin here you not supposed to be back til next week::
Y/n-::my moms let me come home early cuss I think she was lonely.....where's Patrick::*both of yall walked in the house*
Dustin-::he's upstairs let me go get him::
Y/n-::naw let me get him I don't want him to expect that any one else is here::
Dustin-:..k::*but you were allready runing up the stairs *
Y/n-*you took a deep breath and knocked on the door.....*
Patrick-*opened the door all wet with a towel wrapped around his lower body (ooh wee I can see it now) he looked stunned*
Y/n-*hugged him so fast and started to kiss him*
Patrick-::wat are you doin here::
Y/n-::my mom said I could come home early:: *you walked in and sat on the bed* ::so here I am::
Patrick-*sat next to you* :h well I was just about to go with my friends...... but we can spend some time with each other tomorrow::
Y/n-*some great bf I have I haven't seen him in a year and he can't post pon one day with his friends to spend time with me*:k well I'll see you tomorrow.....*gives him a big kiss and leaves*
(next morning around 9:00)
Y/n-* sprung by T-pain started playin on your cell phone so you knew it was Pat you answered it and he told you that every body was gone be comin over your house sence yo moms was at work*
( they came to your house at about 10:45 a.m.)
Everybody-*gave you extra big hugs includin some pple that you haven't seen in a very long time Yolanda aka Londa and Dominique aka Nique you normally only was friends with them in school and only school*
Nique and Londa-::we missed you at school last year::
y/n*walked to the couch and sat by Patrick and kissed him*
Nique-*gave you a look because in 8th grade Pat and her had alittle thing for each other*
Y/n-*looked at Nique with that pregnant dog don't start look* :: so wat we gone do today::
Patrick-::you juss got back so it's up 2 you::
Y/n-:k first I wanna go to the movies then to the mall then do wateva::
(ok once again gonna speed this up to after everyone else was leave)
Patrick-*stayed there with you and once again you are sitting on the couch making out*
Y/n-::what are you doing tomorrow::
Patrick-::I dont have any thing planned but something might come up::
Y/n-::what's wrong with you today....you're acting weird::
Patrick-:;how am I acting weird::
Y/n-:;you just are::
(the next day)
Y/n-*got up and dressed and walked to Patrick's house she rang the door bell*
Bryan-*answered the door already knowing wat you wanted*::Patrick is in his room::
Y/n-*you walked in and knock on his door*
Patrick-*opened the door* :h hey baby I was just about to leave:: *he tried to kiss you but you walked passed him into his room*
Y/n-::Patrick I have to ask you a question...::*sounding worried*..are you cheating on me...::
Patrick-::no why::*gettin defensive*
Y/n-::where you been goin... and why don't know body else know where you go.....I know you not hangin out with friends....why won't you tell me the truth
(end of chapter 6 chapter 7 arguin again..... comin soon and chapter 10 iz the last chapter for part 1)
Patrick-*opened the door* :h hey baby I was just about to leave:: *he tried to kiss you but you walked passed him into his room*
Y/n-::Patrick I have to ask you a question...::*sounding worried*..are you cheating on me...::
Patrick-::no why::*gettin defensive*
Y/n-::where you been goin... and why don't know body else know where you go.....I know you not hangin out with friends....why won't you tell me the truth
Chapter 7 Arguing Again
Patrick-::I am telling you the truth:: *starts to stare in your eyes*
Y/n-::are you really:: *looks into his eyes thinking this is sum bull s#$%*
Patrick-::yes I am...I could never cheat on you.....I love you too much....and you kno that:: *he started leaning in for the kiss*
Y/n-:: some how I don't believe that nuts::
Patrick-*stoped and backed off* ::you don't beleive me...well fine then you don't have to::
Y/n-:$@# straight I don't::*yall both started to yell at each other*
Patrick-:: I don't know what the f%^* is wrong with you but-::
Y/n-::ain't nuthing wrong with me but you need to check yo self cuss you must not remember who you talkin to::
Patrick-:: oh I don't know who I'm talkin to......:: *takes a deep breath to calm himself down*:: ... you know what.....I'm not about to sit here and argue wit you about stupid s#*@:: * he turned to the door and walked out of the room*
Y/n-*you yanked him back in the room and slammed the door so yall could talk* ::you ain't goin know where until we solve this::
Patrick-::b&*^# I'll go where ever I please::
Y/n-::b&*^#.....I'm a b&#@%.....:: *you smacked the taste out of his mouth..* ::ngga I got yo b&^%:; *you smacked him again*
Patrick-::Y/N I'M WANRNING YOU.....NOT TO HIT ME AGAIN::*he tried to grab your arms to stop you from hitting him again*
Y/n-*you pushed him to the wall* ::don't f^&*ing touch me:: *you smack the s$#% out of him::
Patrick-*punched you like you was a dude*
Y/n-*you fell to the ground holding your eye crying*
Patrick-*held his hand over his mouth at the site of what he did and fell on the ground beside you* ::y/n I didn't mean to...and you were juss...:: *he tried to help you up but you pushed him away*
Y/n-:: Just leave me alone Patrick::
Patrick-*stopped touchin you*::I'm sorry....y/n..baby::
Y/n- ::get away from me:: *you rush to your feet and went into the bathroom and slammed the door... you looked in the mirror and noticed your eye was purple soon to be a black eye*
Patick-*knocked on the door* ::y/n baby.... you ok....If you want me to leave I will.... ok then I'm gone:: *he left slowly and went to his "friend's house"*
Y/n-*oh nuts I can't go home like this*
( I know what your thinking ch.7 is short but I'm gonna write ch.8 tonite so stay tuned cuss you never kno when it just might come)
Replay::
Patrick-*stopped touchin you*::I'm sorry....y/n..baby::
Y/n- ::get away from me:: *you rush to your feet and went into the bathroom and slammed the door... you looked in the mirror and noticed your eye was purple soon to be a black eye*
Patick-*knocked on the door* ::y/n baby.... you ok....If you want me to leave I will.... ok then I'm gone:: *he left slowly and went to his "friend's house"*
Y/n-*oh nuts I can't go home like this*
Chapter 8 wtf is wrong with you
y/n- *u were standing infront of on Naira's house waiting for someone to answer the door, you were crying, and you couldn't tell your mother whathad happened so you decided to seek help from a friend*
Naira's POV
(ding dong)
Naira-*in her room with Dustin pickin out an outfit 4 yall double date with Rina and Kelly who was waiting in the next room for yall*
Kelly-*your door was opened so he walked right in* ::wats takin you so long::
Rina-*walked in your room with y/n nobody else noticed yet* ::Naira Y/n's here::
Naira-*turned around from her closet to see y/n crying* ::Y/n what happened....whats wrong::
Rina-*gently pushed Y/n face toward them so they could see*
Dustin-*was sitting on the bed hopped up imediately* ::who did that to you::
Kelly-:h s%^$ thats f$%&ed up....what happened::
Rina-::Patrick knocked the f#$^ out of her like she was a dude that's what::
Naira-::are you f%$^ing serious ......c'mon so I can go bust this nigga's head wide open::
Dustin and Kelly-::wtf are you serious....::
Kelly-::Patrick did this to you?::
Y/n-:: but I hit him first::
Dustin-::btu that dont give him kno d$@! excuse to be hittin you like that-::
Rina-::he shouldn't be touchin her at all:: *grabbs you and starts to drag you out the front door every body else follows*
Naira-::where he at....is he still home::
Dustin-:: text him
(text)
D-Where you at
P-I'm almost home
D-How far from home
P-about two houses away....how far u from home
D- a block a way but i'll be there soon
P- iight
(end of text)
Every body-* yall got to the house and walked in only to see Patrick sittin on the couch*
Patrick-*jumped up quick as hell*
Rina-*put you infront of her and asked* ::wat the f!@# is this:: *pointing to your eye*
Dustin-*punched Patrick in his eye b4 he got to say anything* ::how you like that::
Kelly-:@#$ D calm down:: *pullin Dustin back, who was lookin like he was up for hittin Pat again*
Naira-::you think this sh$# is funny::
Patrick- *got up to his feet*
Rina-::answer the d@!* question::
Patrick-*didn't answer*
Rina-:;he think this is funny:: * Rina and Naira got that look on they face like they knew what one and othe was thinking*
Both-*all of the sudden just started beatin the nuts out of Patrick*
Y/n-::stop....::
Patrick-*on the ground bein stomp*
Kelly and Dustin-*grabbed them both off of Patrick* ::iight thats enough::
Rina-::you don't like it when it's you do you huh:: *smilin at Pat who was tryna get up*
Naira-::c'mon y/n and Rina we don't wanna risk gettin our a** beat by a b^%&* like him
Replay::
Y/n-::stop....::
Patrick-*on the ground bein stomp*
Kelly and Dustin-*grabbed them both off of Patrick* ::iight thats enough::
Rina-::you don't like it when it's you do you huh:: *smilin at Pat who was tryna get up*
Naira-::c'mon y/n and Rina we don't wanna risk gettin our a** beat by a b^%&* like him
Chapter 9 A time to forgive or hate
Y/n-*following Naira and Rina out the door after lookin at Patrick who was gettin up with the help of Dustin and Kelly who probably just wanted to leave him there and probably would've if that weren't their brother.....yall finally got out the door*::why yall have to do him like that::
Naira-::because he did you like that:: *once again pointin to your eye*
Y/n-::but he didn't mean it + I hit him first:: *yall walkin towards Naira's house*
(yall get to Naira's house and you once again spend the night over there....Next Morning)
Y/n-*in the bathroom tryna figure out how u gone hide your black eye*
Naira and Stephanie-*walk in with a bag*
Stephanie-::are you ok.... lemme see.....I'ma beat his azz-::
Y/n-::Rina and Naira handled that so pleaz don't even say nothin bout it to him::
Stephanie-*handing you the bag*:k I won't::*you knew she was lying*
Y/n-::whats this::
Rina-*walked in* ::somethin to cover up yo eye::
Y/n-::thanx:: *this is what made them your best friends they always had yo back and you always had theres*
Cat and Karen-*walked in*
Cat-::you ok...lemme see:: (sound familiar it should)
Karen-::what happened...::
(4 hours later)
Y/n-:k how do it look::
Stephanie-::it dont really show but it look a little puffy especially if you lookin closely::
Karen-::mabe yo mom won't notice::
Cat-::course she gone notice if we notice it still her mom should all moms notice everything::
Y/n-::well I gotta go home I'll jus try to avoid her:;
(speed it up Y/n 2 house down frm hers then she notices Pat yellin at your window)
Patrick-::Y/n.....I kno you mad at me but we need to talk..........I need you baby.............I'm sorry and I'll never treat you like that again::
Y/n-*u came up behind him quietly* ::who you talkin to.::
Patrick-*turned around*::y/n...these are for you:: *he had flowers but you hadn't noticed them before he'd handed them to you* ::y/n baby...I'm sorry....I-::
Y/n-::no I should be sorry I hit you first:; *you kissed him and started inside your house*
Patrick-::wait... Y/n does that mean you forgive me::
Y/n-::yea::
Patrick-::I love you more than living itself::*gave you a long passionate kiss*
Y/n-::I gotta go in the house::
Patrick-:: yo momma aint here so can I come in....::
Y/n-*with a face like that how could you say kno* ::yea::
(yall walked upstairs to your room and had make up sex then)
{to be continued till lata on 2 nite because there is more of ch.8}
Replay::
Patrick-:: yo momma aint here so can I come in....::
Y/n-*with a face like that how could you say kno* ::yea::
(yall walked upstairs to your room and had make up sex then)
Contiued.....Ch. 9 A time to forgive or hate
Y/n-*stood up putin your clothes on Patrick was still laying on your bed (ooh lemme try to vision a naked Patrick.....wow...words can't express wat I'm thinkin)
Patrick-*got up and also started getting dressed then when you were putting on your shirt an already dressed Pat hugged you from behind* ::soo........how was it::
Y/n-::it was good but you weren't bad either.....::
Patrick andY/n-*started laughing*
Patrick-::you got jokes huh::
Y/n-*jokes that would embarrass yo ass* ::that's just how I feel today::
Patrick-*started kissin you on yo neck*
(ding dong)
Y/n-::go down stairs and answer the door and act like nothin happened::
Patrick-::what if it's yo momma::
Y/n-::why would my momma use the door bell::*u sprayed him with air freshiner* (gotta get that smell out)
Patrick-*went down stairs to answer the door*
Y/n-* you sprayed the room with air freshiner and sprayed yourself with perfume then you walked down stairs and saw Nique and Pat siting on the couch*
Nique-::hey...I jus came here 2 ask you to come 2my party 2nite::
Y/n-::yea....I'll be there::
Nique-k see yall tonite then....oh yea and that perfume only make it more obvious::*she walked out and only after 2 min....*
(pat cell ohone rang)
Patrick-*looked at his cell phone* ::I gotta go::
Y/n-*puppy dog eyes* ::already?::
Patrick-::yea but I'll make it up to u:: *kisses you* ::I promise::*he leaves*
Y/n-*wait a min. Nique and Pat had a thing for each other in 8th grade that pregnant dog all the sudden real cool wit us...and as soon as she left here he just happened to have to go he cheatin on me with that ugly hefer*
(is that how you spell hefer(lol)
(yo cell started ringing you answered it)
Y/n-hello
Stephanie-Y/N.....I'm down the street from Pat's house and...and...
Y/n- *worried* ::and what::
Stephanie- gurl.................. he cheatin on you
(ok stay tuned tommorow 4 ch.10 blow out at Pat's house)
you know who it was::
DONT YALL HATE ON HIM
<hes so cute lol
<he pimpin lol
<my boooooooooooooooooos!!!!! lol
