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Post by dustinsmodelgirl on Nov 21, 2005 14:43:41 GMT -5
Hi, girls. My name is Naquisha or Shay. Newaiiz...This is my first story so please bear with me. I don't know how to post pics so I'll tell you what they look like.
Cast:Giselle Nicole Myers or Y/N-17 Patrick Breeding-17 Gigi Frazier-17 Kelly Breeding-17 Susie Smith-16 Carnell Breeding-16 Bianca-16 Bryan-16 Haley-18 Dustin-18 Philip or Dimplez(it's a girl)-17 Jasmine-16 I'll start the intro in a min.
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Post by dustinsmodelgirl on Nov 21, 2005 14:48:34 GMT -5
Hi, my name is Giselle Nicole and I live in Laguna Beach, California with my mom and dad. I live by all my friends: Gigi, Haley, Susie, Bianca,Philip(we call her Dimplez), and Jasmine. I just got some new neighbors. All boys except for their mom. I haven't seen them yet, but what i do know is that I need a new boifriend.
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Post by carnellswifey on Nov 21, 2005 20:07:58 GMT -5
Bump It Up!!!!!
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Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 22, 2005 13:00:00 GMT -5
Bumpies!
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Post by dustinsmodelgirl on Nov 22, 2005 15:19:49 GMT -5
I know these are short but just work with me. This is coming from my head. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's P.O.V.-
Gis-Girls, some people just moved in today. Gigi-Really? Gis-Yep Susie-Did you meet them yet? Gis-No, not yet but I'm going over there today. Maybe a breif welcome to the neighbor. I'll make cookies because I think that it's all boys. All-What?!?! Gis-Chill, they are just boys. So, are you coming or not All-Hell, Yeah. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note-
So you guys make Chocolate Chip Cookies for them. You couldn't seem to get the new people off of your mind. You really wanted to meet them. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's P.O.V-
Gis-So, are you guys ready to go? Haley- Don't have to say it twice. Gis-Ok, let's bounce.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So you and the girl's walk next door to the neighbor's houde, when you see 5 guys playing basketball. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Gis-Girls, look over there. Yes, I knew it was all guys. Haley-Ok, let's go over there. Susie-*grabs Haley's arm* wait, first, we don't want to scare them, and second, how do I look? Jasmine- Fabulos, what about me? E/B-Yeah,what about me,etc. Gis- Girls, calm down. Let's go over, in a good manner, introduce ourselves, give them the cookies, talk a bit, and see if they want to go out some where with us sometime. Dimplez-Out where? Gis-Anywhere, everywhere, anytime, just as long as I can be with them. All-LOL! Gis-Oh, by the way, everyone looks great, so let's go. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So even though you all look good as ever, y'all fix yourselves up one more time, just to make sure. Then you walk up. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Patrick's P.O.V-
Pat-Man, let's play basketball. Dus-Ok. Bryan, you can substitute. Me and Pat vs. Carnell and Kelly. Let's start. We start with the ball first. Pat-Check. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Patrick's Thoughts- All of sudden, I look to my left and I see about 7 girls. Well, isn't this my lucky day. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Patricks P.O.V-
Pat-Time out. Dustin, come here. Dus-k, carnell and Kelly y'all do what y'all do. What, man. Pat- Look over there.*points to his left* Dus-Dammmmmnnnnnnn. They are bangin. Pat- I know. Dus- Kellz, Carnell, come over here. Kelly-What, dude? Carnell-What do you want now? Kelly- I swear this better be good. Pat- Oh, this is better than good. Look at them girls over there.*points in direction* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's P.O.V-
Gis-*Damn, these niggas look good as hell. Ecspiacially because they have no shirts on. Ok, Giselle, calm down.*Hi, how are you.*puts out her hand* Pat-Hey, I'm fine.*but not as fine as you*What about you?*reaches for her hand and kisses it* Gis-I'm fine. Do you live here? Pat- Yep. My bros and mom. Gis- Ok. Well these are my girls Susie, Haley, Dimplez, Bianca, Jasmine, and Gigi. Girls-Hey. Pat-Hi. Gis- Girls, this is.... Wait, I didn't get your name? Pat-My name is Patrick. And you? Gis- My name is Giselle. Pat- pretty name. Gis-Thanks. Pat- I want to meet my mom and bros. I'll be right back. Girls- Ok. *5 minutes later* Pat- Here they are. This is Dustin. Dus-Hi. Pat-Kelly. Kel-Wassup. Pat-Carnell and Bryan. Car- Hey girls. Bry- Hey beautiful ladies. Girls-Hey. Pat-And my beautiful mother, Adrianne. Adr- Hi, girls. Girls- Hi. Gis-Well, welcome to the neighborhood. We made cookies if you want them. Boys-OOOOO Mom-Not so fast. You can have after dinner. Dus- But I don't live here, so can I have one mom? Mom-No because you are staying the night so you have to follow the rules like everyone else today. Dus-Fine. Haley-Where do you live? Dus-Around the corner. Haley-Me,too. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So you guys were there for about two hours. Then, Jasmine and Dimplez decide that they want to go to the beach. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Patrick's Thoughts- I think I'm falling for Giselle. She's perfect. Well, we are going to the beach, so now we can talk some more.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's Thoughts- I think Patrick is soooo sexy. I think I'm falling for him. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So now every one is walking with a guy except for Jasmine and Dimplez. Haley and Dustin, Gigi and Kelly, Susie and Carnell, and Bianca and Bryan, and you and Patrick are walkin' in the back of everyone. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's P.O.V.-
Gis-*damn this nigg@ is fine* So how old are you? Pat-17, and you? Gis-same here Pat-How long have you benn living here? Gis-Forever, and I love it so much. The weather, beaches,everything. Pat-I like it here to. Gis-So what brought you guys to Laguna? Pat-Too much drama. Gis-Where are you from? Pat-Atlanta. Gis-What is it like there? Pat-It's real cool. Giselle-Do you have a girlfriend? Pat-Nope. What about you? Giselle-Nope. *Moment of Silence* Pat-Giselle? Gis-Yes? Pat-I know you probably hear this all the time but you are one of the most gorgeous girls I've seen. Gis-Thanks, and no, I don't hear that all the time. I also think you you are gorgoues. I mean sexy. Pat-*laughs* Thanks. Gis-*smile* Pat-You have such a pretty smile. Gis-Well, aren't you full of compliments. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So you all arrive at the beach, and Jasmine and Dimplez decide that they want to go swimming. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's P.O.V.-
Gis-So now that we are here, what does eveyone want to do now? J&D-Let's go swimming. Carnell-But we don't have trunks. Gigi-So? Dus-So we are going to swim nude. Giselle-*laughs*No, silly. *even though i wouldn't mind seeing Patrick naked*Look, we can go to the mall up there really quick to get suits. Bryan-Ok. Pat-Alright, let's go. *As long as I get to see you half naked* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So everybody goes to the mall and goes their seperate ways. Girls go to Victoria's Secret and Guys go to Hollister. You decide to get something extra, just in case something goes on later. Newaiiz... These are the colors: Giselle-Black w/ pink dots bikini Haley-Black bikini Gigi-White 3 piece Susie-Pink and white tankini Bianca-Pink Striped bikini(only top is striped, bottom is all pink) Jasmine-Black w/ white dots bikini Dimplez-Black tankini 3 piece Pat-Black trunks Dus-Black and White Kellz-White Carnell-Blue Bryan-Blue and White ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by dustinsmodelgirl on Nov 22, 2005 15:24:28 GMT -5
I know these are short but just work with me. This is coming from my head. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's P.O.V.-
Gis-Girls, some people just moved in today. Gigi-Really? Gis-Yep Susie-Did you meet them yet? Gis-No, not yet but I'm going over there today. Maybe a brief welcome to the neighbor. I'll make cookies because I think that it's all boys. All-What?!?! Gis-Chill, they are just boys. So, are you coming or not All-Hell, Yeah. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note-
So you guys make Chocolate Chip Cookies for them. You couldn't seem to get the new people off of your mind. You really wanted to meet them. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's P.O.V-
Gis-So, are you guys ready to go? Haley- Don't have to say it twice. Gis-Ok, let's bounce.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So you and the girl's walk next door to the neighbor's house, when you see 5 guys playing basketball. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Gis-Girls, look over there. Yes, I knew it was all guys. Haley-Ok, let's go over there. Susie-*grabs Haley's arm* wait, first, we don't want to scare them, and second, how do I look? Jasmine- Fabulous, what about me? E/B-Yeah,what about me,etc. Gis- Girls, calm down. Let's go over, in a good manner, introduce ourselves, give them the cookies, talk a bit, and see if they want to go out some where with us sometime. Dimplez-Out where? Gis-Anywhere, everywhere, anytime, just as long as I can be with them. All-LOL! Gis-Oh, by the way, everyone looks great, so let's go. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So even though you all look good as ever, y'all fix yourselves up one more time, just to make sure. Then you walk up. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Patrick's P.O.V-
Pat-Man, let's play basketball. Dus-Ok. Bryan, you can substitute. Me and Pat vs. Carnell and Kelly. Let's start. We start with the ball first. Pat-Check. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Patrick's Thoughts- All of sudden, I look to my left and I see about 7 girls. Well, isn't this my lucky day. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Patrick's P.O.V-
Pat-Time out. Dustin, come here. Dus-k, carnell and Kelly y'all do what y'all do. What, man. Pat- Look over there.*points to his left* Dus-Dammmmmnnnnnnn. They are bangin. Pat- I know. Dus- Kellz, Carnell, come over here. Kelly-What, dude? Carnell-What do you want now? Kelly- I swear this better be good. Pat- Oh, this is better than good. Look at them girls over there.*points in direction* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's P.O.V-
Gis-*Damn, these niggas look good as hell. Especially because they have no shirts on. Ok, Giselle, calm down.*Hi, how are you.*puts out her hand* Pat-Hey, I'm fine.*but not as fine as you*What about you?*reaches for her hand and kisses it* Gis-I'm fine. Do you live here? Pat- Yep. My bros and mom. Gis- Ok. Well these are my girls Susie, Haley, Dimplez, Bianca, Jasmine, and Gigi. Girls-Hey. Pat-Hi. Gis- Girls, this is.... Wait, I didn't get your name? Pat-My name is Patrick. And you? Gis- My name is Giselle. Pat- pretty name. Gis-Thanks. Pat- I want to meet my mom and bros. I'll be right back. Girls- Ok. *5 minutes later* Pat- Here they are. This is Dustin. Dus-Hi. Pat-Kelly. Kel-Wassup. Pat-Carnell and Bryan. Car- Hey girls. Bry- Hey beautiful ladies. Girls-Hey. Pat-And my beautiful mother, Adrianne. Adr- Hi, girls. Girls- Hi. Gis-Well, welcome to the neighborhood. We made cookies if you want them. Boys-OOOOO Mom-Not so fast. You can have after dinner. Dus- But I don't live here, so can I have one mom? Mom-No because you are staying the night so you have to follow the rules like everyone else today. Dus-Fine. Haley-Where do you live? Dus-Around the corner. Haley-Me,too. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So you guys were there for about two hours. Then, Jasmine and Dimplez decide that they want to go to the beach. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Patrick's Thoughts- I think I'm falling for Giselle. She's perfect. Well, we are going to the beach, so now we can talk some more.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's Thoughts- I think Patrick is soooo sexy. I think I'm falling for him. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So now every one is walking with a guy except for Jasmine and Dimplez. Haley and Dustin, Gigi and Kelly, Susie and Carnell, and Bianca and Bryan, and you and Patrick are walkin' in the back of everyone. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's P.O.V.-
Gis-*damn this nigg@ is fine* So how old are you? Pat-17, and you? Gis-same here Pat-How long have you been living here? Gis-Forever, and I love it so much. The weather, beaches,everything. Pat-I like it here to. Gis-So what brought you guys to Laguna? Pat-Too much drama. Gis-Where are you from? Pat-Atlanta. Gis-What is it like there? Pat-It's real cool. Giselle-Do you have a girlfriend? Pat-Nope. What about you? Giselle-Nope. *Moment of Silence* Pat-Giselle? Gis-Yes? Pat-I know you probably hear this all the time but you are one of the most gorgeous girls I've seen. Gis-Thanks, and no, I don't hear that all the time. I also think you you are gorgeous. I mean sexy. Pat-*laughs* Thanks. Gis-*smile* Pat-You have such a pretty smile. Gis-Well, aren't you full of compliments. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So you all arrive at the beach, and Jasmine and Dimplez decide that they want to go swimming. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Giselle's P.O.V.-
Gis-So now that we are here, what does everyone want to do now? J&D-Let's go swimming. Carnell-But we don't have trunks. Gigi-So? Dus-So we are going to swim nude. Giselle-*laughs*No, silly. *even though i wouldn't mind seeing Patrick naked*Look, we can go to the mall up there really quick to get suits. Bryan-Ok. Pat-Alright, let's go. *As long as I get to see you half naked* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So everybody goes to the mall and goes their separate ways. Girls go to Victoria's Secret and Guys go to Hollister. You decide to get something extra, just in case something goes on later. Newaiiz... These are the colors: Giselle-Black w/ pink dots bikini Haley-Black bikini Gigi-White 3 piece Susie-Pink and white tankini Bianca-Pink Striped bikini(only top is striped, bottom is all pink) Jasmine-Black w/ white dots bikini Dimplez-Black tankini 3 piece Pat-Black trunks Dus-Black and White Kellz-White Carnell-Blue Bryan-Blue and White ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by luckie09 on Nov 24, 2005 1:43:12 GMT -5
bump this story up
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Post by carnellshtowngurl on Nov 25, 2005 11:04:23 GMT -5
bumpz
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Post by janea23 on Nov 25, 2005 11:19:38 GMT -5
BUMPIEZ
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Post by dustinsmodelgirl on Nov 25, 2005 18:53:59 GMT -5
This may be short because I am not supposed to be on the computer so... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's Note- So everyone has their suits on and you decide to get some shades for everyone, some sunscreen and towels. You and Patrick lie down on your towels. You have on your shades and Pat is looking at you up and down, licking his lips until you look.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Y/N's P.O.V-
Gis-Can I help you? Pat-*in a daze* Gis-Patrick?!? Pat-Huh? Yeah? Gis-What do you want? Pat-What are you talkin about? Gis-You keep starin at me like you crazy. Pat-Sorry about that. I was just thinkin. Gis-About what? Pat-Everything. My dad, Atlanta, *under his breath*your body. Gis-*acting like you didn't hear that*Oh. Pat, what was that last thing you said? I didn't quite hear you. Pat-Atlanta? Gis-After that. Pat-Nothin else. Gis-Uh-huh. Newaiiz..I need to ask to ask you a question. Pat-Shoot*please ask me out* Gis-Can you rub the sunscreen on my back for me? Pat-*bummed out* Ok. *thinkin out loud* As long as I can touch you. Gis-What was that? Pat-Nothin. Talkin to myself. Gis-*whispers to Pat* I don't mind you touching me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Dec 10, 2005 18:00:07 GMT -5
bumpies
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Post by bryanslilmamma on Dec 11, 2005 1:45:38 GMT -5
bumperz
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Post by *Dustin's~Boo~Tajah* on Jan 1, 2006 22:48:09 GMT -5
BUMP BUMP BUMP
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