yn and patrick my first story
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Nov 19, 2005 20:10:38 GMT -5
Post by yn and patrick my first story on Nov 19, 2005 20:10:38 GMT -5
Dustin(18) Kelly(16) Patrick(15) Carnell(14) Bryan(12) Shawnida(16) Diana(17) Y/n(15) Nikki(14)
And I need a girl for Bryan
Ok Y/n past life sucked cause her dad drinks and hits when he's drunk. So she live's with her mom and her new husband David. Which he hates Y/n because of the way she act's around him. She is very beautiful,kind,smart, and has a lot of friends but most of the time she spents with Diana, Shawnida aka Nida,and Nikki. We all live in Atl and we all go to Atlanta Country Day School. Diana lives with Nida cause her parents died and i live next door. Nikki lives on the other side of me.
I know i suck but it's my first story So what's going to happen to y/n?
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Nov 19, 2005 20:11:58 GMT -5
Post by dizzybaby on Nov 19, 2005 20:11:58 GMT -5
this is my story
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Nov 19, 2005 21:08:00 GMT -5
Post by patrickslittlelady on Nov 19, 2005 21:08:00 GMT -5
Bump
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Nov 19, 2005 21:08:18 GMT -5
Post by patrickslittlelady on Nov 19, 2005 21:08:18 GMT -5
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Nov 20, 2005 13:50:16 GMT -5
Post by bryanslilmamma on Nov 20, 2005 13:50:16 GMT -5
ill be bryans gurl and my name is Shalysa but bump
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Nov 20, 2005 15:00:50 GMT -5
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 20, 2005 15:00:50 GMT -5
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Nov 20, 2005 15:45:23 GMT -5
Post by dizzybaby on Nov 20, 2005 15:45:23 GMT -5
Ok it's the first day of school and y/n is waiting in front of Nida house and see Diana and Nida come out. Y/n-Hey Nida-hey girl Diana-Hey so where's Nikki Y/n-no idea so we go and wait for Nikki in front of her house and 5mins later she comes out. Diana-Finally Nikki-sry i woke up later Y/n-can we go now Nida-ok y do u want to go to school anyway? Y/n-Cause B5 goes there Diana,Nida,and Nikki-ooo yea Nida-i forgot u like Pat Diana-how could u forget she never stops talking about him Y/n-shut up So we to the bus stop about a few mins later the bus comes Diana sit's with Nida.Nikki sit with mike her boyfriend for now.Y/n sit's alone until someone sit's next to her and it's...
Bump to find out who
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Nov 20, 2005 16:03:42 GMT -5
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 20, 2005 16:03:42 GMT -5
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Nov 21, 2005 13:27:38 GMT -5
Post by dizzybaby on Nov 21, 2005 13:27:38 GMT -5
It was Patrick
Patrick-Hi Y/n-Hi Patrick-So what's ur name? Y/n-oo it's....I forgot Since Diana and Nida was sitting right in front of her. Diana and Nida-It's Y/n Y/n-ooo yea it's y/n thanks Diana-How could u forget ur our name Nida-No problem. Diana shut up and turn around So Nida and Diana turn around and back to Y/n and Patrick Y/n-Sry about that Patrick-No problem well my name is Patrick and I'm new here Y/n-that's cool So then the bus stops at school so we all go to our locker which is near each other Diana-This sucks another school year Y/n-HowB5 goes here Diana-Yea so Diana stops talking and looking at Dustin Diana-Ok maybe this year won't be so bad So Dustin walk's up to his locker which is right next to Diana Dustin-Hi I'm Dustin Nikki-Hi I'm Nikki Nida- HI I'm Shawnida but people call me Nida Y/n-I'm Y/n and this one that's not talking is Diana Pointing to Diana Dustin-So does anyonehave Geometrynow? Diana-ooo I do So Dustin walks with Diana to class. Then someone walk's up
Who is it bump to find out
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Nov 21, 2005 13:32:55 GMT -5
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 21, 2005 13:32:55 GMT -5
Bumpies!!
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Nov 22, 2005 16:35:41 GMT -5
Post by dizzybaby on Nov 22, 2005 16:35:41 GMT -5
It was Shalysa, she had a locker next to Nida Shalysa-Hello I'm Shalysa Nida-Hi I'm Nida Out of nowhere Kelly walks up behind her Kelly-hey I'm Kelly Nida's mouth fell to the floor Nikki-Nida u there? Kelly starts laughing Nida-Yea I'm ok Nikki-Ok I thought we lost u Shalysa-Anyway do u know where science is? Bryan-I do Walking up Shalysa-That's cool what to go to class together Bryan-With a pretty girl like u of couse So Bryan and Shalysa walk off.Then Patrick and Carnell walk up Y/n-Hey Patrick Patrick-Hey Looking at her up and down Carnell-Hey I'm Carnell the cute one out of my brothers Nikki-That true and I'm Nikki Nida-Well I'm going to class So looks at a piece of paper Nida-Damn I have English Kelly-o cool me too Carnell-So do I Nikki-(sadly but happy)-Me too So they go to class
With Y/n and Patrick Patrick-So what class do u have? Y/n-History u? Patrick-Same Y/n-That's cool Their walking to class and they sit next to each other and Patrick is just staring at Y/n Y/n-What? Patrick-Nothing Y/n-Ok Patrick-So what r u doing after school? Y/n-Going to a teen club Patrick-That's cool can me and my brothers come? Y/n-Yea but Nida and Diana r working tonight Patrick-O ok
Now to Diana and Dustin Dustin sit next to Diana. Then the teacher walk's in the room and it's Diana's old teacher Ms.White Ms.White-Hello class oo Diana can I talk to u outside So I got up and walked outside Diana-So what did u want Ms.White? Ms.White-Diana I need u to show Dustin Breeding around he has all ur classes Diana-O ok So we walk into class and Dustin is just loooking at Diana. Diana sit back down Dustin-What was that about? Diana-O nothing Dustin-O ok well what u doing tonight? Diana-Working sadly Dustin-Where? Diana-At a teen club u want to to go? Dustin-Sure
Now to Bryan and Shalysa. They go into to the class room and Bryan stop's when he see...
What or who does he see?
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Nov 22, 2005 17:41:40 GMT -5
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 22, 2005 17:41:40 GMT -5
Bumpies!!
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Nov 23, 2005 15:58:45 GMT -5
Post by dizzybaby on Nov 23, 2005 15:58:45 GMT -5
He see's Tratra his ex girlfriend Tratra-Hey Bryan, how's Carnell doing? The reason y Bryan broke up with Traause she was useing him to get to Carnell. Shalysa-Who's this? Tratra-Bryan's girl Bryan-Hell no Tratra it's been over for a month now Tratra-Anyway how's Carnell?Does he have a girl yet? Bryan-He's ok and no but he has a girl in mind and it's not u! Then the teacher walks in and the class start's
Now with Nida,Nikki,Kelly,and Carnell Nida-Hey Nikki u going with us tonight Kelly and Carnell-Where? Nikki-Yea is Diana working too? Nida-Yea she works when I do Kelly and Carnell-Where?! Nikki-To a club. U guys want to go? Kelly-If Nida's there I am Carnell-Yea since ur going Looking at Nikki. Nikki face turned red. Skipping to lunch everyone sitting at the same table. Diana-Hey Nida do u think we have time to go to the mall Before work? Nida-If we don't stop at home Y/n-Good cause I need an outfit for tonight for the club Patrick-Y u look good now Y/n face turned red Diana-Anyway so did he... Nida-No and shut up Diana-Sry just wanted to know Nida-Well did.. Diana-No which sucks Everyone is looking at us then Mike(Nikki's boyfriend) walked up. Nikki-O hey Mike can I talk to u alone Mike-Ok So they walk off. At the table Carnell-Who was that? Nida-Her soon to be ex Carnell-Y she breaking up with him? Diana-Cause she likes u Girls but Diana-Diana!!! Diana-What? Dustin-Come on baby I need to talk to u Nida-Baby? Diana-Shut up it's a nickname like u call me Banana when ur mad at me Nida-Yea ok Dustin and Diana walk off ----Meanwhile---- With Mike and Nikki Nikki-Mike I hate to say this but it's over Mike-O ok Nikki-Well I'm going to go back so bye Mike-Bye Thinking-I'm going to get her back if it's the last thing I do
So what does Mike do? What does Dustin need to talk to Diana about?
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Nov 23, 2005 20:27:53 GMT -5
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 23, 2005 20:27:53 GMT -5
Bumpies!
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Nov 25, 2005 17:10:44 GMT -5
Post by dizzybaby on Nov 25, 2005 17:10:44 GMT -5
Nikki walked back to the table Nikki-So where is Dustin and Diana? Nida-O Dustin needed to talk to her Nikki-O ok do u think he's going to ask her out Boys-Yea! Y/n-But didn't they just meet Shalysa-Yea so ur point would be Y/n-Nothing just wondering anyway what do u do Nida? Nida-O I'm a DJ Y/n-That's cool....
----Maenwhile---- With Dustin and Diana
Diana-So what do u want? Dustin-I was wondering... Diana-What? Dustin-R u free tomarrow? Diana-Yea y? Dustin-U want to hang out at my house? Diana-Yea but can my nicec's come? Dustin-Yea sure
Ok then the bell rang but I'm skipping to after school at the mall
Y/n-So what store next? Diana-Any shoe store cause I need shoes for tonight Y/n-Ok
So the girls went to the shoe store then to get clothes for tonight. The guys went to the game store then to the candy store and after went to get clothes.So after the mall we all went home and change and now at the club. Everyone at a table but Nida and Diana. Y/n-So what r u all of u doing tomarrow? Dustin-I'm hunging with Diana Patrick-O nothing but u want to hang out with me? Y/n-Yea Kelly-Damn when is Nida going on break?
Then Diana walked up
Diana-In about 10 mins. so u guys want a drink? Dustin-Yea when r u getting on break? Diana-Same as Nida Patrick-Yea can i get a coke Y/n-Same here Nikki-Mountain Dew Plz Kelly-Water would be nice Diana-Carnell and Bryan u want anything? Carnell and Bryan-No thank u Diana-Ok I'll be right back
So Diana walked off
Patrick-So Y/n u want to dance? Y/n-Yea sure
So they get up and go dance. At the table
Nikki-So Dustin when u asking Diana out? Dustin-Maybe tomarrow. I'm not sure she likes me Kelly,Carnell,and Bryan-She does
Diana came back
Diana-Who does what? Kelly-Nothing I'm going to go c Nida Diana-Ok she's upstairs Kelly-Ok
So he walked up stairs
Nikki-So Carnell lets dance Carnell-Ok
So they got up and dance
So what happens on the dance floor? Bump to find out
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Nov 25, 2005 17:26:06 GMT -5
Post by chelsey on Nov 25, 2005 17:26:06 GMT -5
bumpies luv luv luv ya story
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Nov 25, 2005 21:18:04 GMT -5
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 25, 2005 21:18:04 GMT -5
Bumperz!
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Nov 25, 2005 22:46:24 GMT -5
Post by *Dustin's~Boo~Tajah* on Nov 25, 2005 22:46:24 GMT -5
BUMP BUMP BUMP IT UP
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Nov 25, 2005 22:50:54 GMT -5
Post by luckie09 on Nov 25, 2005 22:50:54 GMT -5
OOOOO BUMP IT UP GOOD STORY
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Nov 26, 2005 22:26:35 GMT -5
Post by dizzybaby on Nov 26, 2005 22:26:35 GMT -5
Ok with Nida and Kelly
Kelly-Hey girl looking at her up and down Nida-oo hey He walk's up behind her and....
Downstairs with Shalysa,Bryan,and Dustin Bryan-So Candy u want to dance? Shalysa-sure Bryan-Dustin u going to be ok alone? Dustin-yea go ahead lil b So they walk off to the dance floor and Diana walk's by the table Dustin-Diana! Diana-what i didn't do it!! Dustin starts laughing-Girl crazy Diana-yea u have a problem with that? Dustin-Hell naw but can i ask u something? Diana-sure They someone came up behind Diana..
Now back to Nida and Kelly he's behind her dancing to one wish by Ray J (Nida u no me i had to put that in) anyway after that Nida was on break so her and Kelly walk downstairs Nida c me hugging someone and she walk's up it's
my nicec's Kayla and Dejah Nida walk's up Nida-Diana who's this Diana-my baby's Kelly and Dustin-U had kids!!! Diana-hell naw do i look fat to u? Nida-well Diana-Shut up and these r my nicecs kayla and Dejah Kayla-Yea Dejah was around Dianas leg Diana-Dejah honey u want to dance baby girl Dejah-yea Diana-Hey Dustin can u dance with Kayla plz Dustin-sure Diana-Kayla don't touch him i know how u r Kayla- yea Anut Banana Kelly and Dustin-Banana Diana-Don't ask
Sry for Y/n not being in this one and does Kayla listen to Anut Banana?
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Nov 26, 2005 22:29:14 GMT -5
Post by luckie09 on Nov 26, 2005 22:29:14 GMT -5
its aight but bump it up
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Nov 27, 2005 20:36:05 GMT -5
Post by *Dustin's~Boo~Tajah* on Nov 27, 2005 20:36:05 GMT -5
BUMP BUMP BUMP
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Nov 28, 2005 0:47:26 GMT -5
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 28, 2005 0:47:26 GMT -5
LOL Bumpies
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Dec 2, 2005 23:11:35 GMT -5
Post by librachic9215 on Dec 2, 2005 23:11:35 GMT -5
bump gurl!
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Dec 11, 2005 1:31:43 GMT -5
Post by bryanslilmamma on Dec 11, 2005 1:31:43 GMT -5
bumperz
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