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Nov 19, 2005 16:21:47 GMT -5
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 19, 2005 16:21:47 GMT -5
I wrote this a few years ago for a school project.
I've been through it all, I've been yelled at and talked about. There's no feeling I haven't felt, That made me wanna scream and shout.
You don't know what's inside me, For you've never asked. I've got secrets you couldn't imagine, Hidden in my past.
Trials and tribulations, Have hit me in my face. There are many things that can Never ever be erased.
I've been through it all, As you can plainly see. There's almost nothing I can't handle. So go ahead...Try me
So... Whatcha think? I know this is kinda short and corny and all, but c'mon I wrote it 4 years ago. Suprised I still remembered it. LOL
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Nov 19, 2005 16:41:01 GMT -5
Post by badbabychicka on Nov 19, 2005 16:41:01 GMT -5
hey gurl i think it's tight. i wrote a song about lost love. to embaressed to put it on here of course. hi i'm new and my name is taylor. call me LCB fo lil crazy b*tch. HOLLAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Nov 19, 2005 16:55:55 GMT -5
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 19, 2005 16:55:55 GMT -5
TAYLOR!!! Hey!!! You should put it on here.
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Nov 19, 2005 17:21:34 GMT -5
Post by badbabychicka on Nov 19, 2005 17:21:34 GMT -5
i don't know. it's not that hot. i'ma send it to you in a messeage on the website.
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Nov 19, 2005 17:22:56 GMT -5
Post by badbabychicka on Nov 19, 2005 17:22:56 GMT -5
oh but here's a poem i wrote.
Why’d you have to go there? By Taylor D. Hayes
Why’d you have to go there and tell everyone about me? I thought best friends were what we were supposed to be. You told everyone, everyone around and now it’s like I’m odd girl out. You think it’s funny what happened to me. Bet if it happened to you you wouldn’t be laughing don’t you see. He raped me and was oh so cruel. I thought to keep my secret would be your life long rule. But you lied, you lied to me. Now we can never be friends you see. I thought I could trust you, I really thought I could. Now forgiving you I don’t think I should. So tell me why, why’d you go there? Everyone knowing my secret is something I just can’t bare. Please go away I don’t want to live another day. You really hurt me, hurt me bad. Telling everyone my secret made me mad and it made me sad. Now what will I do. Cause everyone at school looks at me like a fool. Well it’s not me it’s you. You gave out my secret. You have lost all trust with me. Now can’t you see? The only person you care about is yourself. You only thought how’d popular you’d get if you tell. But it didn’t work. Now you look like a fool. Now everyone hates you at school. They feel bad for me and their on my side. They shunned you out and now you cry. Now do you see how it feels to be hurt? Don’t even worry cause my pain is much worse. I’ll never forget what he did to me. But you didn’t have to spread it around you see. Now you’re so mad you want to pull out your hair. But it’s all your fault cause you had to go there.
sorry. it's kinda long.
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Nov 19, 2005 18:15:17 GMT -5
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 19, 2005 18:15:17 GMT -5
I like it!!
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Nov 19, 2005 20:41:09 GMT -5
Post by badbabychicka on Nov 19, 2005 20:41:09 GMT -5
really. thanks. my other friends thought it was ''okay''.
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Nov 20, 2005 12:42:51 GMT -5
Post by *Dustin's~Boo~Tajah* on Nov 20, 2005 12:42:51 GMT -5
Hey Mrs. Nicia that is really good
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Nov 20, 2005 13:08:14 GMT -5
Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 20, 2005 13:08:14 GMT -5
Thank you Mrs. Tajah
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Nov 20, 2005 14:08:29 GMT -5
Post by *~*PatrickzAngel09*~* on Nov 20, 2005 14:08:29 GMT -5
AY BOTH OF YALL NICIA N TAYLOR....THAT WAZ GOOD....I LYKED BOTH OF THEM.....**SNAPZ FINGERZ**
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Nov 20, 2005 15:17:02 GMT -5
Post by badbabychicka on Nov 20, 2005 15:17:02 GMT -5
thanks alot.
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Nov 26, 2005 22:09:37 GMT -5
Post by carnellswifey on Nov 26, 2005 22:09:37 GMT -5
Hey I liked both of those...........they were real good.
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Dec 11, 2005 17:20:30 GMT -5
Post by bryanslilmamma on Dec 11, 2005 17:20:30 GMT -5
this is good Nicia
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Dec 13, 2005 19:22:24 GMT -5
Post by luckie09 on Dec 13, 2005 19:22:24 GMT -5
those are good yall
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Dec 13, 2005 19:47:01 GMT -5
Post by badbabychicka on Dec 13, 2005 19:47:01 GMT -5
i know sticky didn't diss me. watta bout mine
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