Thuggish Ruggish Gurl

[honeybee]

This Is my new story about an gurl who is an thug at heart until she meets one boi that will change that completely.



Hey I'm Jordyn but people call me red because of my temper. I was an wild child I had no family but my two brother Chris(Chris brown) and Rome(Lil romeo)My mom died and my dad abandoned us.Growing up with two older brother I had to be tough. I didn't hang out with gurls just one but ill tell you about her later. I mainly hang with my brother and his crew. I never had boyfriends dont get me wrong i was very pretty people say i look like Christina millian before she went blonde.I just didn't have time or the opportunity because of my brothers.I like to sing and dance.I can hit that high note like Mariah Carey
but sing mostly like beyonce i can dance like ciara and Janet Jackson.These are Talents My brothers do no Know about.I didn't know what love felt like until I met him.He changed my life completely and I adored him for that.I kept on playing with his heart not knowing that i was doing it but he stayed until he had me to himself then nobody could separate not even the people who tried hurting me just to get to him or the people that hurt him to get wit me.Lets not forget the people I hurt trying to keep him from them(lol).Stay with me as I take you through a journey so deep that you will asking why?



Bump please and I need people to be in it.
I Need my one and only girlbestfriend shes going to be with Kelly

Carnell/
Dustin/
Bryan/

I need someone to post picture for me

Jordyn/Red-
Chris-Chris Brown
Rome_

Faith-

Kandise-

Amira-

Ashley-

Janea-

[~Mizz~Fizzle~SO~FLy05~]

can i be ya bestfriend and be wit kelly mah name is faith aka fizzle

[honeybee]

tHANK yOU sO MUCH YES YOU CAN BE IN IT BUT I WANT ADD UNTIL I GET BUMPS

[~Mizz~Fizzle~SO~FLy05~]

AIGHT WELL LET ME BE THE FIRST TO BUMP LOL BUMP

[(:~Nicia~:)]

And I'm the second! LOL Bumpies!!

[honeybee]

I was laying in my bed sleep when my brother rome yelled in my ear

Rome:Get you butt up its time for skool
Red:Bye Rome
Rome:get up
Red;By ROME
Rome: Im gonna tell chris
Red: I said By ROME

He left out of my room and i went to sleep.Today was the first day of skool which i dreaded i knew it would come but not this soon.I really didnt feel like going so i went back to skool.Then I heard my door open amd it was my oldest brother chris.

Chris:Red
Red;I dont wanna go
Chris:y not
Red:I just dont feel like being bothered today its just not the same w/out mom here.
Chris:Ok I want force you to go but you (he looked over at rome)your getting your lil bad azz out of my house for today.
Rome: Man that aint even fair
Chris&Red:BYE ROME

I didnt want to go because on the first day of skool ny mom used to wake me up cook me breakfast and tell me she would pick me up and take me to my favorite place in thw whole wide world.The mall.We would shop eat and talk we would stay out all day long and wouldnt tell my brothers then we would sit in the backyard and look at the stars and she would tell me how beautiful i was and i would be a star one day and she would never leave me then as an early gift for the first day of skool.When skool let out she wasnt there i waited then my brother chris came and told me the news and just like that she was gone.Gone out of my for good

[(:~Nicia~:)]

Bumpies

[bryansbabygurl924]

can i be with bryan?
pic:i dont know how to post pics so i'll give you the URL.....http://images.google.com/images?q=tbn:qxfs9P-sUEIJ:www.probertencyclopaedia.com/j/Christina%2520Milian.jpg

[(:~Nicia~:)]

bryansbabygurl924 said:

can i be with bryan?
pic:i dont know how to post pics so i'll give you the URL.....http://images.google.com/images?q=tbn:qxfs9P-sUEIJ:www.probertencyclopaedia.com/j/Christina%2520Milian.jpg

Here it is:

[honeybee]

Yes You can be wit bryan but you have to find another picture because The main Character Jordyn/Red is christina Millian.Whats your name and people i need someone for


Dustin?
Carnell?
Chris?
Rome?

[luckie09]

CAN I BE WIT DUSTIN
KANDISE
16
NICE,MEAN,CARING,EVIL LOVES TO PARTY

pic-

BUMP IT UP PLAYA LOL I'M THE THIRD LOL

OH AND CAN I BE A BEST FRIEND TO LOL

[honeybee]

I finally woke up and got in the shower and put on

C:\Documents and Settings\Administrator\My Documents\My Pictures\clothes.jpg/img]

And A brown shirt that says 2 cute 4 u I put on my brown adidaas and went downstairs.Chris was downstairs wathcing t.v.

Chris:Goodmorning sleepy head
Red:Goodmorning rome gone
Chris:yes so what you wanna do
Red:i dont know
Chris: I got the perfect idea come on
Red;Where are we going
Chris Your favorite place in the whole world

Right when he said that I aknew It was the mallI was happy then kind of sad.When we got there chris took me to get some shoes.I picke out some orange and white forces.

Chris:dont you got a pair of forces in just about every color
Red:no I dont have orange
Chris:ok
After we left footlocker we went to eat .Then Chris gave me a box.
Chris:I know how you feel about her being gone so i decided to let the tradition continue.

When I opened the box i started to cry

[(:~Nicia~:)]

Bumpies!

[bryansbabygurl924]

my name is amira and i'll be:http://images.google.com/images?q=tbn:y9XD_b_if70J:images.usatoday.com/life/_photos/2004/07/27/ciara-inside.jpg

[bryansbabygurl924]

BUMPIES!!!!! i loove bryan bump bump bump

[bryansbabygurl924]

personality: crazy, cool, loud, funny, all around kinda person and dont take no ish

[~Mizz~Fizzle~SO~FLy05~]

awwwww chris is so so sweet im bout to cry bump it up

[luckie09]

U AINT THE ONLY ONE {TEAR}

[honeybee]

Hey Peoples I still need people

Chris had gave me an charm Bracelet with a heart on it.I was so happy he treated me like I was his own child instead of his Lil sister.When we got home we found Rome sitting on the couch looking mad as hell.

Red:Whats wrong wit you
Rome;The Fact that yall been gone all day and you got sacks and didn't tell me or even bring me with yall.

Chris:well you talk to much cau we did get you something and we didn't want you to go.

Then there was a knock at the door.I went and opened it it was this tall boi with black and curly hair i had to admit he was cute.

Red:May I help u
M/v:Im dustin is chris here
Red:Yea Chris Someone is here 4 u
Chris;OOh Hey D was up
Dustin;Nothing just decided to come by
Chris:well come in the back me and my sis is about to play some ball.

I changed into some Nike shorts and a black beater with my black forces on.We were playing and I was dawging chris.

Dustin:Dang, Gal got some skillz
Red:thank you but my name is not gal its Jordyn Or call me red.

Dustin:sorry
Red:You know what since your so cute and your my brothers friend that can be yo lil nickname for me.But I have to go.
Chris: where you going
Red:Im spending the nights over faiths so I can get my hair braided

[honeybee]

Chris:OK r u spending the night
Red:yes I need another fitted cap from you
Chris;I donut like you looking like a Lil boi all the time
Red:get over it I'm not into that gurly look i like to be me
Chris.Bye

I got my bags and went to Faiths house.

Faith:What up red
Red:What Hill
Faith:shut up stupid y u here
Red:Don't you remember my hair
Faith: Sorry but you stink
Red:I'm finna go get in the shower and wash my hair I'm spending the night.
Faith:bye Stinky

I got into the shower and I started singing my favorite song in the whole world

I goota shake you off
Cause the loving ain't the same
And you keep on playing games
Like you know I'm here to stay
I gotta shake you off
Just like the Calgon commercial
I really gotta get up outta here
And go somewhere
I gotta shake you off
Gotta make that move
Find somebody who
Appreciates all the love I give
Boy I gotta shake you off
Gotta do what's best for me
Baby and that means I gotta
Shake you off

By the time you get this message
It's gonna be too late
So don't bother paging me
Cause I'll be on my way
See I grabbed all my diamonds and clothes
Just ask your momma she knows
You're gonna miss me baby
Hate to say I told you so
Well at first I didn't know
But now it's clear to me
You would cheat with all your freaks
And lie compulsively
So I packed up my Louis Vuitton
Jumped in your ride and took off
You'll never ever find a girl
Who loves you more than me

[chorus]
I gotta shake you off
Cause the loving ain't the same
And you keep on playing games
Like you know I'm here to stay
I gotta shake you off
Just like the Calgon commercial
I really gotta get up outta here
And go somewhere
I gotta shake you off
Gotta make that move
Find somebody who
Appreciates all the love I give
Boy I gotta shake you off
Gotta do what's best for me
Baby and that means I gotta
Shake you off

[bridge]
I gotta shake, shake, shake, shake, shake it
Off...

I found out about a gang
Of your dirty little deeds
With this one and that one
By the pool, on the beach, in the streets
Heard y'all was
Hold up my phone's breakin' up
I'ma hang up and call the machine right back
I gotta get this off of my mind
You wasn't worth my time
I've leaving you behind
Cause I need a real love in my life
Save this recording because
I'm never coming back home
Baby I'm gone
Don't cha know

[chorus]
I gotta shake you off
Cause the loving ain't the same
And you keep on playing games
Like you know I'm here to stay
I gotta shake you off
Just like the Calgon commercial
I really gotta get up outta here
And go somewhere
I gotta shake you off
Gotta make that move
Find somebody who
Appreciated all the love I give
Boy I gotta shake you off
Gotta do what's best for me
Baby and that means I gotta
Shake you off

[bridge]

I even hit the high notes in the song and I sounded pretty damn good.When I got out the shower I wrapped an towel around me and i realized I forgot my bag downstairs.When I went downstairs I found Faith and Two mighty fine bois staring at me.

Red;Oh My god y didnt you tell me people was here.
Faith:If you wasnt singing so loud you would've heard me call you
Red:Sorry let me get my bag and go change

I changed into some red booty shorts and a white beater.I blow dried my hair and went downstairs.

Red;Hi
Bois:Hi
Faith;Bout time Mariah this Is Kelly and Patrick.
Patrick:dang Ma you got some vocals on you
red:thank you but my name is red.
Kell:y they call u red
Red:y they call you kelly
Kelly:thats mt name
REd;Well common sense should tell you red is my name if thats what they call me.Now faith come on so you can get started on my hair.

As I was getting my hair braided I saw Patrick sitting and staring at me so I decided to say something.

Red:Is there an reason Why your staring at me.
Patrick:Your so beautiful
Red:y thank y but im not your type
Pat:how do you know that
Faith:yeah How do you know that.
Red:shut up he go for those gurly types tight jeans high heels makeup thats not me right patrick

Pat:silent...
Red:see

When faith got through with my hair i tied it down and went to bed i guess the bois left after I went to bed.I just couldnt get patrick out of my mind I knew I just had to have him.I felt that he would change ny life completely.

[(:~Nicia~:)]

Bumpies

[(:~Nicia~:)]

bryansbabygurl924 said:

my name is amira and i'll be:http://images.google.com/images?q=tbn:y9XD_b_if70J:images.usatoday.com/life/_photos/2004/07/27/ciara-inside.jpg

Here it is:

[honeybee]

When I got up that morning I took a shower and put on my cavaliers jersey and my red forces.I had on a name belt that said RED.I went downstairs to see faith and her mom at the table.

Red:Morning Mama(thats wat I call her)
f/m:hey swettie I like your hair.

FAith had braided the front and put little plats in the back.

Faith:thank u I got skillz dont I
Red:whatever you ready to go I got to get my schedule
FAith:y didnt you come yesterday
Red:couldnt stand to think that she really was gone so chris said I didnt have to go.

Me and FAith walked in the school building.The first thing I saw was Patrick.Why did he have to be so fine.He walked up to us

Patrick:hey ladies
Red:hey
patrick:your so sexy Red you gone be mineRed:boi pleaze
Patrick:just watch.

I went to all my classes and then it was time for lunch I sat at the table with Kelly Faith Patrick, Amira.The I heard someone say gal and I knew who it was I ran and he picked me up and gave me a big hug.

Dustin:Hey Gal
Red:hey sorry I had to leave early the other day I had to get my hair did
Dustin:I like it you got some long hair too.
Kelly:excuse me but how do you know my brother
Red:well hes my brothers bestfriend
Patrick:y he get to call you Gal and we dont
Dustin:cause Im special

[honeybee]

Red:wheres my brother at
Dustin:he coming so how you know my knuckle head brothers
Red;We met a faiths house
Patrick:we met alright did you know she can sing she sound mad goo she hit that high note on that shake it off song

Dustin:I didnt know that but I knew she can play some ball
Just then Chris came up
Dustin:she was whoopin Chris azz in B-Ball.
Kelly:where Kandise at
Dustin:somwhere around here
Red: oh snap you go with Kandise.
Dustin:yea u know here
Red:thats my gurl 4 life well she'll be my only friend when faith dies eating that hamburger

Everyone looked over at Faith grubbing on a burger

FAith:what
Red:lol see what I mean
Patrick:So you can sing play ball and you dont eat meat your so amazing
Rome had came up to the table by then
Rome:Jordyn cant sing
Kelly:whos Jordyn
Red:me thats my real name
Kelly;Y they call you red
Red:because of my temper its very short
Patrick:Jordyn can I talk to you for a minute privately
Red:sure
When we went into the hall way patrick pinned me up on the wall and started tonguin me down.I had to admit I was liking it but i didint want him to know that so i pushed him off I looked deep into his pretty brown eyes and couldnt resist him II grabbed him and started tongugin him down until he finally broke it apart.

Patrick:I knew you liked me
Red:yeah
Patrick:do you wanna be my gurl
Red:i dont know look at me i dont look like ost gurls I dont wear heel or skirts

Patrick:I dont care your prettier that these gurls anyway your talented
Red:of course Ill be your gurl.

We went back into the lunch room Holdin hands everyone was looking at us by that time Chris & Dustin had left

Faith:yall go together
Red:yep
Faith:good for yall know we can double date
PAtrick:with who
Faith:me and Kell aint that right baby
Kell: yep

i felt like a MILLION bucks.Patrick was the one for me he loved me for me.Then the drama started 3 months after we where together.I had to fight some gurl who thought she was bad

I was over the breedings house with Faith,Amira and KAndise.

amiraa;Hey Jordyn i like your shoes
KAndise:yeah they cold
FAith:she just about got all the colors

knock,Knock

Patrick:baby can you get the door
Red:sure

I opened the door there was this gurl standing at the door she looked plastic she wasnt ugly but yet she wasnt cutte I know I looked way better than her.

Gurl:Is patrick Here
Red:May I ask who you are
Gurl"dont worry about it B****
Amira:Patrick you better come and get this lil gurl for red kill her.
Bryan:amira what aree you yelling about(he looked over where I was standing and said)Oh Shit

Patrick:what your mouth(he looked who it was and said)Oh SHIT.

Patrick:what do you want Brittany
Brittany: Yopuo
PAtrick:y cant have me Im with Red
Brittany:SO this gurl is red she is not cute she dresses like a boi.

I just stood ther because i dont argue I fight t dont listen to what they think about me but i dont play when he comes to callin me out of my name.So as she sit there talking KAndise and them kept tellin Pat to get me.

PAtrick:what you talking bout she calme
Brittany:she better be calm I will lay her out

After she said that I just started throwing blows left and right she was on the groung bleediong so kicked her and went back to the couch without saying a word and watched T.V. As I saw her swagger out the door I laughed.The Dumb Brawd Didnt know when to shut her mouth she thought I was some punk but I punked her azz sp I know she wont be messing with me any more.

They all looked at me even Dustin And Chris came down and saw the fight Chris didnt say anything cause he knew she was pressing my buttons

Kelly:DAng Red u crazy
Dustin:u didnt say a word just bet her down know you acting all calm anw what not

Chris:Thats How she is she dont argue she just hit and be calm with it all she says all that arguing makes you look triflyin and its not lady Like

Patrck:lol Lady Like
Red:whats so funny abouth being lady like
Patrick:your not gurly your boish so how do you know about lady like.

[missashl3y]

bump it up girl !! i like it


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