Post by belice131 on Dec 2, 2006 20:17:57 GMT -5
Y/n Y/l/n is a 16-year-old girl. She's like any other girl, but she has a huge secret. She lives with her mom, and her four sisters. She used to live in Chicago, but now she's in Atlanta at a juvenile detention center for a crime she didn't commit. And with her is the best thing that's ever happened to her, Kelly Breeding, but you know what, I'm going to let her tell you the story....
My name is Y/n Y/l/n. I live in Atlanta, Georgia with my mom, my stepfather, and my four sisters, Ni-Asia, Megan, Kadijah, and Crystal. I had just come home from my high school River Wood, and I realized I needed to do some cleaning. I decided to start with my closet first. I opened my closet door and looked up. As I was about to take out a box full of stuff I still hadn’t unpacked, a different box all the way in the back caught my attention. As I reached up and took it down. It was extremely dusty and I knew by the faded flower design I hadn’t opened it in a long time. I took it to my bed and sat down. I slowly undusted the box and opened it. I was amazed at the amount of wonderful memories I could see and look back on. All those memories I had not exactly put behind me, just hadn’t thought about in awhile. Well, I guess that in order to tell you how amazing they were, I should start from the beginning.
Main Characters:
Y/n Y/l/n-16
Kelly Breeding-16
Ni-Asia Y/l/n-18
Dustin Breeding-18
Megan Y/l/n-15
Patrick Breeding-15
Jasmine Y/l/n-14
Carnell Breeding-14
Kadijah Y/l/n-11
Bryan Breeding-11
Additional Characters:
Mrs. Y/m Y/l/n
Mrs. Adrian Breeding
*Dr. Warren Cable
*Mr. Y/f Y/l/n
Jada Edwards & Gillette Edwards-16
Xavier Marshall-16
Rahim Anderson-16
*Kendall Reese-14
*Jamal Ramos-7
*Heleny Ramos-16
*Derrick Sanchez-16
*Mykel Thompson-16
*Gia Harris-16
*Jay Williamson-16
*Janet Jefferson-16
*Alejandro de la Vega-15
* = Characters don’t come into the story until later or are only in for a short period of time. Ages are at the beginning of the story.
I was walking on North Avenue Beach. The sun was setting right on the lake, and it was so incredibly beautiful. I had never seen the sun set on Lake Michigan in all my years of living in Chicago, but I didn’t care. Everything was perfect. The sand was hot between my toes but felt really good. And the breeze was so refreshing. Then my gaze moved toward one of the docks.
I saw two people, but I couldn’t make them out. As I looked closer could make out a boy and a girl. I recognized the boy as Kelly. Standing with him was……….me. That couldn’t be right. I was over here. But I could hear him speaking in my ear as if he was standing right next to me.
Then suddenly the scenery changed. The sun disappeared and the beach was in complete darkness. I looked at Kelly and the girl that was supposed to be me. The moon had come out and was bigger than I had ever seen it. It seemed to be shining a devilish glare on them as it “rose from the bottom of the lake”. As I looked closer I saw…myself begin to change. She, or me, changed into none other than my nemesis Janet Jefferson. Kelly hadn’t noticed her change and she knew it. She also knew I was there watching. She turned around and gave me that look she always did before she got me into trouble. She turned back to Kelly, put her arms around his neck, and tilted her head up to him. She was going to kiss him. She was going to torture me by kissing my boyfriend when he had no idea it wasn’t me.
I tried to warn him by screaming so he would see me, but my voice felt like it was stuck, glued, to the sides of my throat. I felt myself break into a run, but I could see that I wasn’t going anywhere. They got closer and closer. I screamed, but I was too late. She kissed him for what seemed like an eternity. Finally she let him go and turned to give me that devilish look again. In the blink of an eye, she vanished. I saw Kelly stumble backwards.
I was running, this time going somewhere. I was running and screaming, praying that he hadn’t thought that was me. I saw him fall off the dock and into the lake. I finally reached the dock and ran to the edge where he had fallen. I leaned over to see if I could see him. He was floating right where he had fallen. His face had a look of shock and hurt that pained me. I reached for his hand, and his expression changed. He looked angry and hurt. Then my world fell apart with his next three words, “I hate you.” I broke down and cried. He wouldn’t let me save him. He hated me. I wiped my eyes and looked again. He had disappeared. He was gone and he wasn’t ever coming back.
Then I heard my name.
F/v: Y/n!
F/v: Wake up!
I awoke with a start to see a girl and another girl….that looked just like her at the foot of my bed.
Y/n: Um…who are you?
F/v: I’m Jada.
F/v: And I’m Gillette.
Jada: We’re twins.
Y/n: *sighs* That’s a relief. I thought I was seeing double for a second.
Gillette: You sure you weren’t?
Y/n: Don’t do that! You’re confusing me.
Jada: Ay Y/n, are you ok?
Gillette: You looked like you were having a nightmare.
Y/n: Nah, I’m ok. I sleep kind of wild.
I could tell they didn’t believe me. So I told them about the dream.
Jada: Dang! That was sad!
Gillette: Kelly’s your boyfriend?
Y/n: Yeah.
Jada: There was a rumor going around,
Gillette: But we didn’t know if it was true though.
Y/n: That he has a girlfriend?
Jada: Yeah.
Y/n: He didn’t have a girlfriend? I mean before?
Gillette: Nope. We are just his friends and into other guys, but he hadn’t told us.
Jada: And the rest of these girls….well we won’t go there.
Y/n: How long was I asleep?
Gillette: You were knocked out for so long,
Jada: you missed breakfast.
Y/n: Why didn’t Ms. Kalaya wake me up?
Gillette: It’s Saturday.
Jada: It’s Visitor’s Day.
[b[Was it just me or did they keep finishing each other’s sentences?[/b]
Y/n: Do you guys finish each other’s sentences like that all the time?
Gillette: Pretty much. Our counselor thinks
Jada: we can read other’s minds.
Gillette: I think she’s right because
Jada: it can be just the two of us
Gillette: and we’re having a conversation.
Jada: But we’re not really,
Gillette: it’s all in our heads.
Jada: What they call,
Gillette: twin telepathy.
Y/n: That’s cool. It’s a little weird, but cool.
Jada: Well if you don’t mind,
Gillette: We are going to go eat lunch.
At the mention of lunch my stomach growled. I had missed breakfast and was SUPER hungry.
Y/n: Ay hold up. Can I come with you?
Jada: You just told us a nightmare that was kind of personal.
Gillette: You think we wouldn’t let you come along? I’m shocked.
Jada: Plus you scored Kelly as your boyfriend,
Gillette: this we have to see.
Y/n: Lolz. Alright then, let me get dressed.
After I got dressed, Jada, Gillette, and I headed to the cafeteria.
Jada: I hope they don’t serve that meatloaf again.
Gillette: Because that stuff was nasty! It tasted like rubber.
Y/n: At least the mashed potatoes are good, and the gravy has some kind of flavor.
J/G: True. True.
Me, Jada, and Gillette got our lunches and sat down at an empty table in the back of the cafeteria.
Y/n: What’s Kelly’s history with girls here?
Gillette: Is it just me or is somebody
Jada: worried about losing her man?
Y/n: Shut up. I’m serious.
J/G: So are we.
Y/n: I just wanted to know if I have anything to worry about.
Jada: Believe me you don’t.
Gillette: When Kelly is serious about a girl,
Jada: he thinks and lives and breathes her.
J/G: Plus he told us.
Y/n: I guess we’ll see.
Gillette: Hey you going to eat that cookie?
Y/n: Back off. You don’t mess with a black girl’s food. Especially cookies.
Jada: Yeah mmhmm. Whatever.
Me, Gillette, and Jada kept talking and joking when I felt these soft but strong arms wrap around my waist. Then I heard his voice.
M/v: Hey baby girl, I missed you at breakfast.
Y/n: Hey Kelly.
Jada: Oh my God.
Gillette: It is true!
Kelly: Hey Jada. Hey Gillette. I see you’ve met my girl.
Jada and Gillette looked at me slyly.
Jada: Better watch out Y/n.
Gillette: He’s a player.
Y/n: Whatever. Ya’ll think ya’ll got jokes don’t you?
Jada: Hey when you got it,
Gillette: you got it,
J/G: and we got it.
Kelly: Ya’ll some mentals.
He turned to me.
Kelly: So how come I missed you at breakfast?
I wasn’t sure if I should tell him, after all it was no big deal, right?
Y/n: I um….overslept.
Kelly: Are you ok? You’ve seemed kind of tired lately.
I exchanged looks with Jada and Gillette. I tried to tell them with my eyes not to tell him about my nightmare. They seemed to get it.
Y/n: Yeah…I’m fine. I’m just adjusting to the new schedule.
Kelly: Alright. You’d tell me if there was something wrong though, right?
Man, he was making me feel bad.
Y/n: Right.
Kelly: Well anyways, today is-
He was cut off by the ringing voice of Ms. Kalaya.
Ms.Kalaya: ALL RIGHT! LISTEN UP! I HAVE A LIST OF NAMES OF THE PEOPLE WHO HAVE VISITORS TODAY. IF YOUR NAME IS NOT CALLED YOU HAVE FREE TIME FOR THE REST OF THE DAY. EVERYONE WHO’S NAME IS CALLED LINE UP AGAINST THE WALL……JAY WILLIAMSON!
I’m not even sure why I was listening. My mama and sisters were back in Chicago. But then the last two names caught my attention.
Ms.Kalaya: KELLY BREEDING! AND….Y/N Y/L/N!
Y/n: Say. What?!
Jada: You act surprised.
Y/n: I am. I don’t know who’s visiting me.
Kelly: Come on, let’s go find out.
Y/n: I’ll see ya’ll later.
J/G: We’ll be outside.
Kelly and I followed the rest of the people who had visitors to the center’s lobby.
Y/n: Who’s here to visit you?
Kelly: Probably my brothers. My mama doesn’t come as much as she used to.
Y/n: Oh.
Kelly: Who do you think is here to see you?
Y/n: I’m not sure. It couldn’t be my mama or sisters because they wouldn’t have come all the way out here from Chicago, so the only person it could be is-
I couldn’t finish my sentence. We had walked into the center’s lobby and I saw a few parents waiting. I saw 4 boys who I guessed to be Kelly’s brothers. But what really caught my attention and why I hadn’t been able to finish my sentence was the man sitting in a chair near the door. I recognized him almost instantly. After 3 years that man had come to see me. After 3 years my father had entered my life again…..and I couldn’t speak.
Man: Hello Y/n. I don’t think you remember, but I’m your father.
I looked over at Kelly who looked like he would die of shock. I couldn’t believe it. He dared to walk back into my life after 3 years of some really dumb crap I had to go through without him. And even in the 13 years he had been in my life you couldn’t call that fatherhood.
Y/n: What are you doing here? You’re wasting your time because I don’t want you here.
Kelly: Y/n, that’s your dad.
Y/n: No Kelly, that’s my father and that’s all he’ll ever be to me.
Y/f: I know I haven’t been there for you for the past 3 years but-
Y/n: 3 YEARS! Try 16! You can’t honestly call those other 13 years fatherhood! I don’t want you here! You obviously didn’t think I needed you for 16 years. Well I don’t need you now!
I rushed out the lobby hoping he couldn’t see the hot tears running down my face.
i know it seems lame now, but i promise it gets better.
Criminals?-A Y/n and Kelly Story
By Low-low
By Low-low
My name is Y/n Y/l/n. I live in Atlanta, Georgia with my mom, my stepfather, and my four sisters, Ni-Asia, Megan, Kadijah, and Crystal. I had just come home from my high school River Wood, and I realized I needed to do some cleaning. I decided to start with my closet first. I opened my closet door and looked up. As I was about to take out a box full of stuff I still hadn’t unpacked, a different box all the way in the back caught my attention. As I reached up and took it down. It was extremely dusty and I knew by the faded flower design I hadn’t opened it in a long time. I took it to my bed and sat down. I slowly undusted the box and opened it. I was amazed at the amount of wonderful memories I could see and look back on. All those memories I had not exactly put behind me, just hadn’t thought about in awhile. Well, I guess that in order to tell you how amazing they were, I should start from the beginning.
Main Characters:
Y/n Y/l/n-16
Kelly Breeding-16
Ni-Asia Y/l/n-18
Dustin Breeding-18
Megan Y/l/n-15
Patrick Breeding-15
Jasmine Y/l/n-14
Carnell Breeding-14
Kadijah Y/l/n-11
Bryan Breeding-11
Additional Characters:
Mrs. Y/m Y/l/n
Mrs. Adrian Breeding
*Dr. Warren Cable
*Mr. Y/f Y/l/n
Jada Edwards & Gillette Edwards-16
Xavier Marshall-16
Rahim Anderson-16
*Kendall Reese-14
*Jamal Ramos-7
*Heleny Ramos-16
*Derrick Sanchez-16
*Mykel Thompson-16
*Gia Harris-16
*Jay Williamson-16
*Janet Jefferson-16
*Alejandro de la Vega-15
* = Characters don’t come into the story until later or are only in for a short period of time. Ages are at the beginning of the story.
I was walking on North Avenue Beach. The sun was setting right on the lake, and it was so incredibly beautiful. I had never seen the sun set on Lake Michigan in all my years of living in Chicago, but I didn’t care. Everything was perfect. The sand was hot between my toes but felt really good. And the breeze was so refreshing. Then my gaze moved toward one of the docks.
I saw two people, but I couldn’t make them out. As I looked closer could make out a boy and a girl. I recognized the boy as Kelly. Standing with him was……….me. That couldn’t be right. I was over here. But I could hear him speaking in my ear as if he was standing right next to me.
Then suddenly the scenery changed. The sun disappeared and the beach was in complete darkness. I looked at Kelly and the girl that was supposed to be me. The moon had come out and was bigger than I had ever seen it. It seemed to be shining a devilish glare on them as it “rose from the bottom of the lake”. As I looked closer I saw…myself begin to change. She, or me, changed into none other than my nemesis Janet Jefferson. Kelly hadn’t noticed her change and she knew it. She also knew I was there watching. She turned around and gave me that look she always did before she got me into trouble. She turned back to Kelly, put her arms around his neck, and tilted her head up to him. She was going to kiss him. She was going to torture me by kissing my boyfriend when he had no idea it wasn’t me.
I tried to warn him by screaming so he would see me, but my voice felt like it was stuck, glued, to the sides of my throat. I felt myself break into a run, but I could see that I wasn’t going anywhere. They got closer and closer. I screamed, but I was too late. She kissed him for what seemed like an eternity. Finally she let him go and turned to give me that devilish look again. In the blink of an eye, she vanished. I saw Kelly stumble backwards.
I was running, this time going somewhere. I was running and screaming, praying that he hadn’t thought that was me. I saw him fall off the dock and into the lake. I finally reached the dock and ran to the edge where he had fallen. I leaned over to see if I could see him. He was floating right where he had fallen. His face had a look of shock and hurt that pained me. I reached for his hand, and his expression changed. He looked angry and hurt. Then my world fell apart with his next three words, “I hate you.” I broke down and cried. He wouldn’t let me save him. He hated me. I wiped my eyes and looked again. He had disappeared. He was gone and he wasn’t ever coming back.
Then I heard my name.
F/v: Y/n!
F/v: Wake up!
I awoke with a start to see a girl and another girl….that looked just like her at the foot of my bed.
Y/n: Um…who are you?
F/v: I’m Jada.
F/v: And I’m Gillette.
Jada: We’re twins.
Y/n: *sighs* That’s a relief. I thought I was seeing double for a second.
Gillette: You sure you weren’t?
Y/n: Don’t do that! You’re confusing me.
Jada: Ay Y/n, are you ok?
Gillette: You looked like you were having a nightmare.
Y/n: Nah, I’m ok. I sleep kind of wild.
I could tell they didn’t believe me. So I told them about the dream.
Jada: Dang! That was sad!
Gillette: Kelly’s your boyfriend?
Y/n: Yeah.
Jada: There was a rumor going around,
Gillette: But we didn’t know if it was true though.
Y/n: That he has a girlfriend?
Jada: Yeah.
Y/n: He didn’t have a girlfriend? I mean before?
Gillette: Nope. We are just his friends and into other guys, but he hadn’t told us.
Jada: And the rest of these girls….well we won’t go there.
Y/n: How long was I asleep?
Gillette: You were knocked out for so long,
Jada: you missed breakfast.
Y/n: Why didn’t Ms. Kalaya wake me up?
Gillette: It’s Saturday.
Jada: It’s Visitor’s Day.
[b[Was it just me or did they keep finishing each other’s sentences?[/b]
Y/n: Do you guys finish each other’s sentences like that all the time?
Gillette: Pretty much. Our counselor thinks
Jada: we can read other’s minds.
Gillette: I think she’s right because
Jada: it can be just the two of us
Gillette: and we’re having a conversation.
Jada: But we’re not really,
Gillette: it’s all in our heads.
Jada: What they call,
Gillette: twin telepathy.
Y/n: That’s cool. It’s a little weird, but cool.
Jada: Well if you don’t mind,
Gillette: We are going to go eat lunch.
At the mention of lunch my stomach growled. I had missed breakfast and was SUPER hungry.
Y/n: Ay hold up. Can I come with you?
Jada: You just told us a nightmare that was kind of personal.
Gillette: You think we wouldn’t let you come along? I’m shocked.
Jada: Plus you scored Kelly as your boyfriend,
Gillette: this we have to see.
Y/n: Lolz. Alright then, let me get dressed.
After I got dressed, Jada, Gillette, and I headed to the cafeteria.
Jada: I hope they don’t serve that meatloaf again.
Gillette: Because that stuff was nasty! It tasted like rubber.
Y/n: At least the mashed potatoes are good, and the gravy has some kind of flavor.
J/G: True. True.
Me, Jada, and Gillette got our lunches and sat down at an empty table in the back of the cafeteria.
Y/n: What’s Kelly’s history with girls here?
Gillette: Is it just me or is somebody
Jada: worried about losing her man?
Y/n: Shut up. I’m serious.
J/G: So are we.
Y/n: I just wanted to know if I have anything to worry about.
Jada: Believe me you don’t.
Gillette: When Kelly is serious about a girl,
Jada: he thinks and lives and breathes her.
J/G: Plus he told us.
Y/n: I guess we’ll see.
Gillette: Hey you going to eat that cookie?
Y/n: Back off. You don’t mess with a black girl’s food. Especially cookies.
Jada: Yeah mmhmm. Whatever.
Me, Gillette, and Jada kept talking and joking when I felt these soft but strong arms wrap around my waist. Then I heard his voice.
M/v: Hey baby girl, I missed you at breakfast.
Y/n: Hey Kelly.
Jada: Oh my God.
Gillette: It is true!
Kelly: Hey Jada. Hey Gillette. I see you’ve met my girl.
Jada and Gillette looked at me slyly.
Jada: Better watch out Y/n.
Gillette: He’s a player.
Y/n: Whatever. Ya’ll think ya’ll got jokes don’t you?
Jada: Hey when you got it,
Gillette: you got it,
J/G: and we got it.
Kelly: Ya’ll some mentals.
He turned to me.
Kelly: So how come I missed you at breakfast?
I wasn’t sure if I should tell him, after all it was no big deal, right?
Y/n: I um….overslept.
Kelly: Are you ok? You’ve seemed kind of tired lately.
I exchanged looks with Jada and Gillette. I tried to tell them with my eyes not to tell him about my nightmare. They seemed to get it.
Y/n: Yeah…I’m fine. I’m just adjusting to the new schedule.
Kelly: Alright. You’d tell me if there was something wrong though, right?
Man, he was making me feel bad.
Y/n: Right.
Kelly: Well anyways, today is-
He was cut off by the ringing voice of Ms. Kalaya.
Ms.Kalaya: ALL RIGHT! LISTEN UP! I HAVE A LIST OF NAMES OF THE PEOPLE WHO HAVE VISITORS TODAY. IF YOUR NAME IS NOT CALLED YOU HAVE FREE TIME FOR THE REST OF THE DAY. EVERYONE WHO’S NAME IS CALLED LINE UP AGAINST THE WALL……JAY WILLIAMSON!
I’m not even sure why I was listening. My mama and sisters were back in Chicago. But then the last two names caught my attention.
Ms.Kalaya: KELLY BREEDING! AND….Y/N Y/L/N!
Y/n: Say. What?!
Jada: You act surprised.
Y/n: I am. I don’t know who’s visiting me.
Kelly: Come on, let’s go find out.
Y/n: I’ll see ya’ll later.
J/G: We’ll be outside.
Kelly and I followed the rest of the people who had visitors to the center’s lobby.
Y/n: Who’s here to visit you?
Kelly: Probably my brothers. My mama doesn’t come as much as she used to.
Y/n: Oh.
Kelly: Who do you think is here to see you?
Y/n: I’m not sure. It couldn’t be my mama or sisters because they wouldn’t have come all the way out here from Chicago, so the only person it could be is-
I couldn’t finish my sentence. We had walked into the center’s lobby and I saw a few parents waiting. I saw 4 boys who I guessed to be Kelly’s brothers. But what really caught my attention and why I hadn’t been able to finish my sentence was the man sitting in a chair near the door. I recognized him almost instantly. After 3 years that man had come to see me. After 3 years my father had entered my life again…..and I couldn’t speak.
Man: Hello Y/n. I don’t think you remember, but I’m your father.
I looked over at Kelly who looked like he would die of shock. I couldn’t believe it. He dared to walk back into my life after 3 years of some really dumb crap I had to go through without him. And even in the 13 years he had been in my life you couldn’t call that fatherhood.
Y/n: What are you doing here? You’re wasting your time because I don’t want you here.
Kelly: Y/n, that’s your dad.
Y/n: No Kelly, that’s my father and that’s all he’ll ever be to me.
Y/f: I know I haven’t been there for you for the past 3 years but-
Y/n: 3 YEARS! Try 16! You can’t honestly call those other 13 years fatherhood! I don’t want you here! You obviously didn’t think I needed you for 16 years. Well I don’t need you now!
I rushed out the lobby hoping he couldn’t see the hot tears running down my face.
i know it seems lame now, but i promise it gets better.
