just us.

[coco]

hello my name is y/n.im 14 years old and im dating the finest boy in school patrick breeding.
my best friends are Eva,KK,Lisa and of course Carnell. whats more is to say about carnell hes sweet shy and funni and always have my back. Now patrick however could learn from him.......



CH.1
~*at y/n's house*~
RINNNNNNNNNNNNG!
y/n:hello?
kk:hey!
y/n:hey how you doin?
kk:im doin fine listen me and the othas are goin to the movies do u and patrick wanna cum?
y/n:um i havent seen patrick all day and when i called his house bryan said he wasnt there
kk:oh well can you cum?
y/n:you kno im already on my way. bye gurl.
kk:bye
~*at the movies*~
Eva:do yall wanna see roll bounce or what?
kelly:hell naw i dont wanna see that gay f*g skatin for two hours.
(dont worry yall i love bow wow..well not really )
kk:ahem thats my baby daddy you talkin about
Kelly:*laughs*girl you already have a baby daddy...me
e/b:awwwwwwwwwwwwwww
kk:*blushes*yall shut up
lisa:whateva*looks around*hey y/n isnt that patrick at the consession stand?
y/n:where?
*y/n walks to the consession stand and then she stops*
y/n:WTF!!!!!!!!







ch.2

y/n's pov
*my patrick my patrick all ova sum hoe but luckily for him im a calm person....*

y/n-WTF!!!! PATRICK!!!!

(calm huh? )

patrick-O SHYT

hoe-baby who is this ?

y/n-b!tch who are you

hoe- first of all my name is janet. second of all-

y/n-b!tch f**k u

*e/b runs up*

kk-y/n whats wrong?

y/n- ask patrick (she has tears in her eyes)

patrick-baby look....

y/n-dont you baby me.

(patrick tries to touch her sholder but she brushes him off)
y/n-dont you touch me.

patrick-girl who are you raising your voice to

(he steps up to her lookin pissed)

carnell-nigga if you touch her.......

patrick-you'll what

(carnell walks up to patrick and........)

2bc
what happens
and whats lisa and eva gonna do to janet ?



ch.3

RECAP
(carnell walks up to patrick and........)

Dustin: whoa carnell *holds carnell back*

(ha yall thought they were gonna fight in the movie theater)

carnell:man let me go

y/n:carnell calm down.....listen yall im going home lata.

*she leaves*

Carnell:y/n...

*he runs after her*

Kelly:patrick i outta kick your a-

kk-kelly dont even mess with him

janet: you kno what im out *looks at dustin* heres my numba *tries to give him a slip of paper.... until..)

Eva:O HELL NAW!!!!

*she grabs janet by her hair and throws her to the floor,but janet trips eva to the floor. before anybody could do anything about it they were fighting*

Dustin: Eva!!! *tries to pull them apart* ay kelly a little help!!

kelly:*laughs* ok hold on man....

*Kelly and Dustin finally pulls them away from each other Eva diddnt have a scratch on her, janet however had a black eye, a busted lip, and a chunk of her hair out*

dustin:baby are u alright?

Eva:im fine thank you very much.

Janets pov
o this b!tch did not just do this to me, but i got somthing for her.....

Normal pov

*janet pulls out some thing shiny from her purse and points it to eva...*

lisa pov
d**n that b!tch got laid the f**k out!!
hey whats that shiny th-
OMG EVA!!!!!!







ch.4

*AT THE THEATHER.*

Lisa:OMG EVA!!!! LOOK OUT!!

*janet waves the switchblade at eva's face but she instead stabs eva's stomach.*

EVA:*moans and collaspses to the floor*

DUSTIN:Eva!!!! *he drops to the floor and holds eva*

KK:SOMEBODY CALL 911!!! HURRY!!!

(BRYAN GETS OUT A CELL PHONE AND CALLS 911)
BRYAN:there on their way.

(10 min, later-a police car and ambulance comes.
two policemen takes janet away and an ambulance takes eva and dustin away)

KELLY:somebody call Y/N and carnell and tell them to goto the hospital.

KK:I will....
(she picks up her cell phone and calls Y/N )

KK:hello

M/V:hello?

KK:who is this?





















who is the man's voice
and whats going to happen to poor eva....

2bc












ch.5
~*at y/ns house*~
*y/n had locked herself in her room and carnell is trying to talk to her*

carnell:y/n please i kno your hurt but-

y/n:leave me alone carnell.

carnell:y/n I'm your best friend...at least let me in so we can talk

y/n:.................

carnell:please y/n.......

*she opens the door*

y/n:come in

carnell:thx

*he goes into her room and sits next to her on her bed,they dont say anything until*

y/n:carnell did you know if patrick was cheating on me?

carnell:no y/n you know i would tell you if i knew

y/n:i know its just that*she looks down* i cant believe that he would do this to me
*she starts crying*

carnell:o y/n

*he hugs her tightly*

carnell:im so sorry this happened to you....

y/n:carnell, its just *sigh* i knew that he was too good to be true.

*carnell gets up and walks to her stereo*

carnell:well i know one thing that'll cheer you up

*he puts on a radio station and chris brown run it is on*

carnell:dancing

*he puts his hands on her waist,picks her up and spins her around*

y/n:*laughing*ahhhhhhhhh carnell put me down

*they do this for at least two more songs they then fall onto her bed laughing*

y/n:*sits up*thanks carnell

carnell:for what?

y/n:for cheering me up

*he sits up and smiles at her ,she smiles back.they both look at each other and lean in*

*suddenly y/n's phone rings"let me hold u"

y/n:awwww man*they look away embarrassed*

y/n:um carnell i have to go down stairs can you get it

carnell:um yeah sure

*he ansewers the phone*

kk:hello?

carnell:hello?

kk:who is this?

carnell:kk its me,whats wrong is sounds like your crying?

kk:carnell,its eva shes in the hospital.

carnell: what?!?

kk:carnell meet us at the hospital quickly

carnell:ok kk me and y/n will meet yall there.

kk:k bye

carnell:bye
*they hang up*
carnell:y/n its eva

y/n:eva? whats wrong with her?

carnell:y/n..... she's in the hospital

y/n:what oh no

carnell:c'mon lets go

~*at the hospital~*

*eva is in critical condition and y/n and carnell just showed up*

y/n:dustin im so sorry

*she hugs him*

*dustin hugs her tightly back, crying into her shoulder*

*suddenly doctors run by them*

lisa:whats going on?

kk:i dont kno lis

kelly:what if there going into eva's room

dustin:ill go check it out
*he goes to eva's room*


patrick:y/n look-

y/n:patrick dont look at me or talk to me im not in the f**kin mood

patrick:please babygirl i love you so much please forgive me

y/n:patrick you took my heart and crushed it do you think i want you back. and that hoe just stabbed my best friend so you can just go to hell
.
*before patrick can respond they all hear a scream*






ch.6
RECAP
*before patrick can respond they all hear a scream*
END OF RECAP

Lisa:OMG who was that?

Kelly:i dont kno but im going to check it out

carnell:i'll come with you

y/n:me too

*they all get up*

kk:It sounded like a girl.....

(they hear another scream comming from eva's room)

Kelly:o no...

(y/n runs to eva's room and throws opens the door)

e/b:EVA!!!!

(they all saw eva laying on her back in her bed screaming and pointing at an I.V. TUBE attached to her arm while dustin was trying to calm her down)

EVA:GET IT OFF ME!!!!!!!!!

Dustin:baby calm down.

EVA:NEVER!!!!!!!!

E./B: uhhhhhhh.........

(eva notices them)

eva:o hey guys how are you doing?

kk:um fine eva

eva:good listen-

Lisa:EVA!!!

(she tries to hug eva)

eva:OWWWWW (winces in pain)

Lisa:srry girl

eva:oww anywayz how are yall doin'

kk:fine how bout you

(meanwhile e/b tries to help eva [fluffing her pillows etc.])

eva:ive seen better listen yall dont have to do all this/

e/b:yes we do

eva:sure,listen im telling yall-

(she gets cut off by dustin who kisses her)

kelly:umm kk i think we should leave

kk:uh i agree come on lis

lisa:but i dont wanna leave.......

KK:come on Lisa!!!!!!!!!

Lisa:ok ok *muttters* b!tch

KK: excuse me

Lisa:um i said boy i wish i was rich

kk:ok whatever lets go

(e/b leaves except for dustin because he was still kissing eva)

(ten minutes later they break apart smiling)

eva:d**n boy i should get stabbed often

dustin:baby dont say that(he holds her hand)

eva:i know.... baby?

dustin:yeah?

eva:promise me we'll be together forever...

dustin:baby you know i will...

eva:i kno (she sighs and closes her eyes) its just that i love you too much

dustin:(he smiles and says)babygirl i love you too much to leave you.

(eva smiles and kisses him again)
















2WEEKS LATER.........

EVA LEAVES THE HOSPITAL AND SHE AND DUSTIN ARE STRONGER THAT EVER

KK AND KELLY ARE GOOD TOO THEY JUST CELEBRATED THEIR ONE MONTH ANNERVERSERY

BRYAN AND LISA ARE STILL DENING THAT THEY LIKE EACH OTHER.... FOR NOW.

PATRICK IS SINGLE BUT HE STILL MESSES WITH OTHER GIRLS.

AS FOR Y/N AND CARNELL..........

[coco]

NOTICE:ok yall theyre toughts are going to be in ()

no on with the storie.

AS FOR Y/N AND CARNELL....
THEY CLAIM THAT THEYRE NOT GOING OUT AND THAT THEY'RE JUST FRIENDS BUT THAT MAY CHANGE.....


~*~at y/n's house~*~
(riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing)
Y/N: hello?
carnell:hey.
Y/N: hey c whatcha doin'
carnell:nothing how bout you.
Y/N:same here.
carnell:u wanna come over.
Y/N:yea sure.
carnell: (yes!)k so ill see you later
Y/N:yea bye.
carnell:bye.
(they both hang up)
y/m:Y/N!!
Y/N:YEA MOM!
y/m:where are you going?
y/n:to carnell's house
y/m:o ok . make sure u tell adrian i said hi.
y/n:k bye ma
y/m:bye dear.
*y/n leaves the house*
y/n:(dang today is nice kids playing,birds chirping *sigh* the only way this day would be bad was if it was raining today...)
*as Y/N walks to the front door,she sees patrick and some of his friends playing basketball at his garage.she tries her best to ignore them and it seems to be working until..)

patrick:hey y/n

Y/N:*rolls her eyes* whatever *she walks to the breedings front door*

patrick:*he grabs her arm*what did you say.

Y/N: let go off me

Patrick:*he pulls her closer to him *whatever b!tch

Y/N:.....*he pulls her arm back and runs to the front door.*

boy1:hey man what was that for.

patrick:man she just a h@e

boy1:man what ever
*they go back to playing basketball*

carnell:hey y/n

y/n:hey c *she hugs him*

carnell:*blushing*uhhh do you wanna watch a movie in my room.

y/n:umm sure race you up there.

carnell:your on.

*they both run up the stairs to his room and they both fall on his bed*

carnell:hahaha i beat you!

y/n:boy you wish.

*he starts to tickle her and they both watch longest yard.*

[coco]

RECAP
(they're watching longest yard)
END OF RECAP



carnell:*he looks a y/n* (wow shes so pretty but she looks so sad if only she knew that i want to be more than friends so much more......................)

Y/N:*looks at carnell*(man he looks so good right now i wanna be more than friends but if i go with him patrick might do some thing to me...or worse carnell,but who cares what patrick thinks...i dont)


y/n: why are you staring at me like that?

carnell:because youre pretty.

y/n:wha?

carnell:o um i mean i-i-i- uhhhhhh *he looks flusttered and looks away*

y/n:ummmm *she blushes and looks away too.*

carnell*clears his throat* um y/n..

y/n:yea..

carnell:theres something i always wanted to do.

y/n:and whats th-

*he cuts her off by kissing her softly on the lips they do this for thirty seconds until they break apart*

y/n:............................................

carnell:well what do you think?

y/n: i -i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-

carnell:*he takes a deep breath and stands up pulling her up gently so that they're both standing* look y/n i kno you just broke off with patrick but girl i love you ever since i met you. and i know im late but *he takes both her hands* y/n if you be my girl i'll treat you like a princess no wait a queen so y/n.............


*he takes a velvet box out his pocket and takes a necklace with a silver heart on it*

carnell:y/n will you be my girl

y/n:*her mouth is open as carnell waits for an answer.*

carnell:y/n ................

y/n:carnell i-i-i-i-i love you too. *she hugs him tightly* i will i will *she has tears comming down her face now*

carnell: *he smiles and put the necklace in her neck*

*carnell suddenly steps back and goes to his studio and turns on sum soft music he turns to her and puts his hands on her waist as she puts her hands around his neck they dance slowly while the c.d. is playing*

y/n: so how long have you been planning this?

carnell:*smiles* for quite some time.

y/n:so what do you think the others are you gonna say?

carnell:hmmmm maybe about time we went out

y/n:*laughs* yea they probaly will *sighs* carnell never let me go.

carnell: *he looks at her and runs his hands through her hair* i wont................

*he kisses her slowly and she kisses him back but soon they kiss deeper and faster and they both stop and they both have sly looks on their faces*

carnell:.......................

y/n:well?

carnell:DANG GIRL YOU SHO CAN KISS!!!

y/n: *laughs* i kno ...

carnell:*laughs too* so what do you wanna do now?

y/n: well we can look at old photos of us......

carnell:yea sure our photos are downstairs ill go get them.

y/n: k.

*as carnell walks downstairs patrick is comming upstairs sweaty from his basketball game and as he passes carnells room he sees y/n,he goes in*

patrick:hey y/n.........

y/n:*glares at him* what do you want now

patrick:well i just wanted to tell you *he closes the door and walks toward y/n* that ill take you back........

y/n: take me back?!? nigga you cheated on me i aint do #### to you!

patrick: girl you know when we were together we never f##### *he grabs her sholders *

y/n:patrick lemme go!!! *but she cant shake him off he forces her to kiss him with his tounge practically down her throat*

*patrick pushes y/n down onto carnells bed and unbuttons her pants while hes still kissing her*

y/n pov: omg why is he doing this to me ?!? what did i ever do to him?? omg carnell plz help me......


*y/n bites his tounge suddenly and as patrick screams she screams for help*

y/n:CARNELL !!!! HELP !!!!!!!! PLEASE HELP!!!!!!!!!

patrick:SHUT UP *he slaps her and she moans with pain , patrick pulls off his pants...........*

meanwhile with carnell....

carnells pov: what was that is t-that y/n.

there it is again i better go check it out

*he runs up the stairs hearing a slap he realizes someone else is up there with her......patrick. he runs to his room and bust opens the door.*

carnell:Y/N!!!!!!!!!!

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THX FOR THE BUMPS GUYS ;D SORRY I HAVENT UPDATED I HAD TO STUDY FOR A TEST.......AND I PASSED (WITH A A-)

carnell:Y/N!!!!!

*carnell looked at the scene before him he saw y/n looking petrified and was underneath patrick who was quickly zipping up his pants , breathing hard*

carnell:whats the #### is going on?

patrick:*getting off of y/n* nothing man

carnell:nothing sure dosnt look like nothing...

patrick:man whats your problem?

carnell:man what eva .......... y/n?

y/n:.............................

carnell:*turns to patrick* what did you do to her!

patrick:man i aint do sh!t to that b!tch.

carnell suddenly punches pat square in the jaw.patrick looks suprised for a moment then he suddenly lunges at carnell pushing him to the floor and punching carnell in the stomach multiple times.carnell manages to roll patrick off of him but it wasnt an easy task.patrick stood up and stared at his brother who trying to get up.patrick grabbed carnell by his shirt and pulled him up then gave him a final blow to his stomach.carnell doubled over grabbing his stomach gasping for air .
patrick looked at carnell, spat on him and walked out his room.

y/n pov
how......how could this happen...carnell i got to see if hes........

she looked over to see carnell uncounsious and bleeding on the floor.

y/n:CARNELL!!!

she slowly gets off the bed and slowly but carefully places carnell on his bed and checks his stomach to see if theres damage....... she lifts his shirt and puts her hand over her mouth his stomach was blue and black and was swelling quickly. she lowers his shirt and puts her head in her hands.

how could this happen to him carnell my carnell ....

?: y/n.............

she looks up and sees carnell struggling to stand up

y/n: carnell..........

carnell;y/n......... i ..i...love y-

he suddenly coughs , he his eyes bulge out he then begins coughing up blood....too much blood.

y/n:no....

he begins to convulse

y/n: no.....

he stops moving

y/n:NOOO!!!




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Y/N:NO!

she shoots up from her bed breathing hard
.
omg, y/n thought, that was too realistic .......... carnell is he ........no it was just a dream a horrible horrible dream
and patrick he diddnt try to assualt me.....

she put her head in her hands and starts to calm down alittle...

just a horrible dream.............

y/m: y/n honey i heard screams are you ok?

y/n looks at her mom and puts on a false smile

y/n:yea mom im ok

y/m didnt look convinced but she left y/n alone in her room.


~*~ riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing~*~

y/n:hello?

m/v:hey y/n its me

y/n.........


















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y/n:........................hello?

carnell:hey y/n.

y/n:hey c

carnell:sooooooo what are you doing?

y/n:nothing much ........you?

carnell:same here y/n do you wanna come over?

y/n:depends is patrick going to be there?

carnell:uhhh yes

y/n:sorry carnell i cant

carnell:oh uh ok then how about the park?

y/n:i would love too.

carnell:*sounds happy* cool so ill meet you there?

y/n:yep....bye

carnell:bye.

<click>



y/n puts on



















she looks in the mirror and puts on lip gloss and hoop earings .

y/n:mom im going to meet carnell at the park

y/m:ok honey bye

y/n:bye mom

y/n walks towards the park while humming to her self but she dosnt see the boy in front of her.


?: y/n ?


she turns around and sees patrick looking at her.

y/n:what do you want

patrick:i just want to say sorry

y/n:no way pat bye

*she turns away and walks toward the park entrance but patrick grabs her arm and pulls her roughly to her*

y/n:let go!!

patrick:not till you agree to go out with me again

*she pulls her arm back*

y/n:ill never go with you *she turns a walks inside the park entrance*

suddenly her phone rings "luxurious" its carnell.

y.n:hello.

carnell:hey y/n where are you

y/n:im at the entrance right now how about you?

carnell:ok hold on im on my way there ok.

y/n:ok bye

<click>

y/n:guess ill just wait till he comes

*she sits on the park bench and waits till carnell comes but she dosnt see someone come behind the bench*

carnell:y/n?

y/n: *she turns around* o hey carnell

*he walks around and sits next y/n ,they dont say any thing untill*


carnell:y/n i have something to tell you....

y/n:what .....

carnell:i have a ..................................



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carnell:i have a .............................girlfriend.

y/n:...............

carnell:y/n

y/n:um congrats um listen i gotta go

y/n stands up looking with a expression on her face................happiness for her friend or maybe jealously of his girl? who knows but she definetly looked weird.

carnell:y/n are you ok-

y/n:im fine carnell listen i really gotta go

carnell:fine but i just wanted to kno if youll come to my house and meet her-

y/n:yeah sure ....bye c

carnell:bye y/n....

y/n walked towards the park entrance and carnell stared after her

(ok y/ns thoughts are gonna be inpink and carnells red.)

i wonder what y/ns problem is... its probably nothing but she looked funny.....

carnell shook his head got up and headed to his house.



meanwhile with y.n

i cant belive carnell has a girlfriend ...i mean i dont like him or anything but still .......

while y/n was thinking about carnell , she didnt see the boy in front of her.

y/n:ouch! what the fuck!

? ? ? :im sorry are you ok?

y/n: um yeah im ok

damn this boy is fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine

? ? ? ? forgive my manners my name is damien .

y/n:hi my names y/n

damien:hey y/n can i ask you something?

y/n:yeah sure

damien:you got a man?

y/n: nah you gotta a girl?

damien:nope,one more question

y/n:yeah

damien:can i ask you out on a date ?

y/n:yes you can.

damien:*smiling* ok can i get you num-

y/n:here.

y/n hands him a slip of paper

damien:*laughs* dang ma so ima call you later?

y/n: you betta

damien:k can i do one more thing

y/n:yep

damien:can i give you a kiss?

y/n:sure.....

he kisses her on the cheek and gives her a hug

damien:bye ma

y/n:bye

damien walks away leaving a very happy y/n behind him.

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