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Post by luckie09 on Nov 14, 2005 20:30:37 GMT -5
BUMP IT UP
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Post by covergirl1004 on Nov 14, 2005 20:31:39 GMT -5
FINALLY PAGE 2 LMAO
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Post by luckie09 on Nov 14, 2005 20:33:27 GMT -5
U SLOW LOL
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Post by covergirl1004 on Nov 14, 2005 20:34:16 GMT -5
IT WAS TAKIN LIKE FOR EVER LOL
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Post by luckie09 on Nov 14, 2005 20:44:37 GMT -5
WHEN U WRITEN MOE
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Post by covergirl1004 on Nov 14, 2005 20:53:31 GMT -5
um............tomorrow fa sho
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Post by luckie09 on Nov 14, 2005 21:05:02 GMT -5
aight coo
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Post by covergirl1004 on Nov 15, 2005 18:06:20 GMT -5
RECAP
dustin- yall some crazy ass niggas
bryan- i like that song.....im'ma sing it to yall tonight
patrick- sit yo young ass down back to what i was singin i mean saying who is this nigga
m/v- is there a problem
carnell- ayo dude sit yo a.s.s down and shut up we havin a family conference right now so if u dont mind
patrick/dustin/kelly/carnell/bryan- F.U.C.K OFF
erika- yall calm down iight this is...............
NEW PART
erika- yall calm down iight
ari- were waiting
angie- yeah girl get to the point and yeah yo braids r tight but u need to let blu hook u up
m/v- (not knowing what to say) um..............okay
bryan- cut to the chase who is this?
erika- his name is Omari
blu- does omari have a last name?
erika- (gettin pissed) actually he doesnt have a last name chick
dustin- uh-oh cat fight
rissa- (confused) now how in the hell did that happen
carnell- (looks at her then rolls his eyes)
dustin- i still thing they got hooked on phonics lol
patrick- yeah they do
kenya- dumb ass thats for spelling
dustin- she still need it lol
blu- anyways back to the main subject who r u? and i want ur whole name... 1st middle and last
m/v aka omari- um my name is Omari Ishmael(sp?) Grandberry and i was just talkin to erika over there(pointin a table)
kelly- (pulling omari's hand down) uh-uh dont do that we a bunch of black folks in a white club nigga u cant be doin that cuz thats how u get shot and i aint gettin shot for no n.i.g.g.a that i just met five minutes ago
omari- (putting his hand down) yeah right but is there a problem with me talking to erika?
kenya- actually there i.........(GOT CUT OFF **pay attention cuz this is gonna be put as GCO from now on**)
erika- (getting out of her chair) not a problem with it ayo blu
blu- wha chu want nigga?
erika- gimme the key to the house for later
blu- (looks at her for a second) ARI TALK TO YO SISTER
ari- (givin erika her keys) take mine
erika- (givin ari a kiss on the cheek) thankies sis
ari- (takin a sip of her drink**just to let yall kno all the boys got either henny and coke on the rocks or beer and the girls got either long island ice tea or bacarda watermellon~I REALLY WANNA TASTE THAT 1~)welcomes
erika- (walks around to everybody and kisses them on the cheek and tells them she'll see them later then when she gets to blu she tries to do the same but blu turnes her head) okay then ion kno whats wrong with u but we'll talk about it later okay
blu- (mocking her) okay (rolls her eyes)
rissa- can i hear FAMILY FEUD....i said can i hear FAMILY FEUD
everybody laughs and erika walks out the club
kenya- he's cute
rissa- he iight he aint all that but he iight (carnell starts smilen)
blu- (falls out of her chair and passes out)
ari- omg
dustin- call 911 somebody
kelly- (picks her up and feels blood on her hand) she got shot
patrick- (jumpin up) WTF
they put blu in the car with dustin and ari rides with them but in kelly's car its angie thats driving and kenya but in the car with patrick is rissa carnell and bryan(they felt that he needed the most comfort at this time)
**in kelly's car**
kenya- do u think i should call erika?
kelly- yeah do that cuz i kno she'll be pissed if u dont
**in patrick's car**
patrick- how in the hell did this happen i mean......... (breaks down) we were right there
rissa- (rubbing his back) its alright PB she's gonna make it
carnell- i got a quick lil question ya kno just a lil summtin summtin i just thought about
everybody in the car- laughs a lil
bryan- whats the question
carnell- when we were leaving did yall hear laughing?
rissa- yeah i did
bryan- yeah i did 2
silence
carnell- did u patrick?
patrick - ..................................
did patrick hear it to?
who do u think shot me...........write ur answers
and bump up my story to find out what happens next
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Post by ~Mizz~Fizzle~SO~FLy05~ on Nov 15, 2005 18:07:01 GMT -5
bumpies girl i luv ya story
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Post by covergirl1004 on Nov 15, 2005 18:12:15 GMT -5
thankies lol
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Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 15, 2005 18:45:51 GMT -5
I wonder....Bumpies!!!!!
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Post by bryansbabygurl924 on Nov 16, 2005 14:42:11 GMT -5
~NEW READER~ i luv ure story keep it up...omg what if patrick knows who shot you/her well BUMP
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Post by kelly1baby on Nov 17, 2005 19:22:36 GMT -5
bump this
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Post by covergirl1004 on Nov 17, 2005 20:22:29 GMT -5
imma add more later yall..............bumpz!
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Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 17, 2005 20:23:37 GMT -5
M&Ms! Bumpies!!
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Post by covergirl1004 on Nov 17, 2005 21:59:02 GMT -5
REPLAY
**in patrick's car**
patrick- how in the hell did this happen i mean......... (breaks down) we were right there
rissa- (rubbing his back) its alright PB she's gonna make it
carnell- i got a quick lil question ya kno just a lil summtin summtin i just thought about
everybody in the car- laughs a lil
bryan- whats the question
carnell- when we were leaving did yall hear laughing?
rissa- yeah i did
bryan- yeah i did 2
silence
carnell- did u patrick?
patrick - ..................................
NEW PART
patrick- ...................................
bryan- did u or did u not?
patrick- yeah but it was a dudes voice so i kno it wasnt amanda if thats what yall were thinkin
rissa- (suckin her teeth) always takin up for that bald head b.i.t.c.h
patrick- (rollin his eyes) whatever (takes out his phone and calls amanda's cell)
m/v- hello?
patrick- (suspicious) yeah can i speak to amanda?
m/v- let me think about it............no
patrick- nigga i aint call to talk to u let me talk to amanda
m/v- ion kno why no men callin my girl's phone nigga
patrick- yo girl?
m/v- yeah my girl
patrick- i just broke up with that b.i.t.c.h no longer than 25 minutes ago
m/v- i kno
patrick- 4get it.......tell her i kno she did it
m/v- no i did it
patrick- who are you?
m/v- im.......................
**in dustin's car**
ari- ayo why he swirvin like that?
dustin- (lookin out the mirror) ion kno but he needs to stop
ari- (gettin out the car cuz they r at the hospital) iight how are we gonna get her in there?
dustin- (pickin her up over his shoulders) like this im'ma bring her in there and u fill out the papers cuz erika aint here
erika- yes i am
dustin- (almost droping blu) dont scare me like that
erika- nigga dont drop my sister
**they bring her into the back room and they do an operation and the doctors come back out**
kenya- (jumping up) is she okay
dr. NoName- can i speak to Mr. Patrick Breeding
patrick- (jumping up also) is there a problem?
dr. NoName- well...................
whats wrong with me?
bump it up to find out
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Post by bryansbabygurl924 on Nov 18, 2005 15:48:12 GMT -5
bump
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Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 18, 2005 18:41:05 GMT -5
What's wrong with you??!!! C'mon Bumpies!!!
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Post by ~Mizz~Fizzle~SO~FLy05~ on Nov 18, 2005 22:51:11 GMT -5
bumpies bump bump
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Post by flygurl109 on Nov 19, 2005 10:20:16 GMT -5
Bumpz!
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Post by carnellssugar on Nov 19, 2005 12:04:26 GMT -5
bump bump bump this ish to the sky high!
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Post by bryanslilmamma on Nov 20, 2005 12:28:12 GMT -5
bump
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Post by kelly1baby on Nov 20, 2005 19:53:13 GMT -5
bump this
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Post by covergirl1004 on Nov 20, 2005 21:33:59 GMT -5
iight people i got bad news...i wont be on cuz im goin on a trip wit my kinfolk for a week so imma try to be on sunday but if im not......just kno that im doin homework....imma make like 2 more adds b4 i leave tonight and i want yall to continue to bump this story up...please and thankies
brb
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Post by covergirl1004 on Nov 20, 2005 22:34:43 GMT -5
RECAP
**in dustin's car**
ari- ayo why he swirvin like that?
dustin- (lookin out the mirror) ion kno but he needs to stop
ari- (gettin out the car cuz they r at the hospital) iight how are we gonna get her in there?
dustin- (pickin her up over his shoulders) like this im'ma bring her in there and u fill out the papers cuz erika aint here
erika- yes i am
dustin- (almost droping blu) dont scare me like that
erika- nigga dont drop my sister
**they bring her into the back room and they do an operation and the doctors come back out**
kenya- (jumping up) is she okay
dr. NoName- can i speak to Mr. Patrick Breeding
patrick- (jumping up also) is there a problem?
dr. NoName- well...................
NEW PART
dr. NoName- well she was stabbed in her back and she has severe injuries but i'll let her go home on under 1 case
parick- yeah what is it?
dr. NoName- i want U to stay with her and I want U to watch after her got it?
patrick- (confused) how am i gonna do that when she lives with her sister's?
dr. NoName- oh im gonna tell them the case but yall can go see her now
bryan- okay which room she in?
dr. NoName- she asked to be put in room........(GCO)
everybody in unison- 4
dr. NoName- yeah (lol)
so everybody walks to my room and angie dustin rissa carnell kenya and bryan leaving ari kelly erika and patrick in the hall nervous
**IN THE ROOM**
dustin- hey mami u iight?
blu- yeah im straight it just burnes a little
angie- okay can u explain to me what actually happened cuz im confused as hell
kenya- just like usual lol
everybody- lol
blu- okay um all i remember is sitting in the chair talkin bout what r we going to go eat then i passed out
bryan- okay why did u pass out?
blu- i guess it was in shock ion really kno
carnell- oh but its okay u kno
rissa- yeah let me find out who did this to u......im'ma get my uncle rosco and life and trigga
blu- um..............okay but anyways where's patrick and ari and kelly?
them+erika- coming through the door
blu- (looking at erika) oh ur here 2 now u wanna be here
erika- whats ur problem?
blu- ITS YOU CANT YOU SEE?
ari- dont worry girl its the medicane talking
blu- no its not im wide awake.........i told them to not give me none
erika- then what the hell is wrong with you?!?
blu- its..........................
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<hes so cute lol
<he pimpin lol
<my boooooooooooooooooos!!!!! lol
DONT YALL HATE ON HIM
