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Post by carnellcrazy on Nov 4, 2005 18:23:24 GMT -5
bump it up!
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Post by chelsey on Nov 4, 2005 20:42:08 GMT -5
dey kicked his azz
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Post by luckie09 on Nov 4, 2005 20:45:06 GMT -5
DEY BETTER HAD SHOT I KNOW I WOULD HAVE
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Post by KellzSweetNovy on Nov 6, 2005 18:10:20 GMT -5
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Post by lo26 on Nov 7, 2005 1:00:17 GMT -5
omg omg I am so sorry I was soooo busy these passed few dayz and I g2g now so I'll write 2morrow I promise (sorry)
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Post by Jacelle on Nov 7, 2005 12:07:08 GMT -5
Gurl you betta bump this up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >:(Im glad they wooped his a$$. He deserved every bit of it!!!
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Post by bryansbabygurl924 on Nov 7, 2005 15:56:41 GMT -5
bump
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Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 7, 2005 20:12:57 GMT -5
M&Ms! BUMPIES!!
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Post by lo26 on Nov 7, 2005 22:32:53 GMT -5
(sorry I took so long to get thiz out)
Replay::
Y/n-*you were on your stairs cryin*
Rina-::you sure you gone be ok here byyour self::
Y/n- ::yea I'm gonna be ok::
Every body except Pat-*they left after about 2 hours it was almost midnight and you and Patrick were at your house alone*
Ch. 4 part 2 All Alone continued
Y/n- *you walked over to the couch and sat down, you were so frustrated u thought you were gonna cry again so you covered your face with the both of your hands*
Patrick- *came over to you and sat down right next to you he hugged you tight*
Y/n- *you felt comfortable and safe in his arms and you were startin to think to your self what if you two were back together.....mabe Patrick changed.... you looked at him deep in his eyes and gave him an unsuspected kiss*
Patrick-*kissed you back, you started to lay back on the couch then you stopped kissin him* ::you ok::
Y/n-*you started holdin your head you felt alittle whoosey and your vision was still alittle blurry then your head started to ache soon after............... you got up and rush to the bathroom*
Patrick POV
Y/n- *got up and ran into the bathroom*
Patrick- *d@#*.... I betta go check on her, walked to the bathroom and knocked on the closed door* ::Y/n you ok in there......::
Y/n- ::I don't think so..I think I drank to much::
Patrick- ::you need any thing....::
Y/n- ::no..... I'm ok::
Patrick- :: ok well I'ma be waitin out on the couch:: *I walked to the livin room and sat down on the couch
End of Patrick POV
Y/n- *walked out of the bathroom and walked down stairs* :: so what time you goin home::
Patrick- :: well I was gonna leave in a few but I think I should stay longer you don't need to be here by your self all night in thiz condition::
Y/n- ::well you can stay here 4 tha night my moms not gonna be back till around 11:00 am 2morrow :: *you wanted him to stay even though you was tryin to act like you really didnt care*
Patrick- ::do you want me 2 stay::
Y/n- ::yea wateva:: *you wanted to say hell yea but you didn't want it to seem like beggin* ::well I gotta go change so...I'ma be upstairs for a while:: *you started walkin up stairs *
Patrick- ::so where am I supposed to sleep:: *he yelled after you*
Y/n- :: any where you want except for my moms room :;
Patrick-::*callin after you again* ::you didn't say I couldn't sleep in your room::
Y/n- *you wanted to say I kno but you just pretended not to hear him*
(2 hours later)
Y/n- *you had taken a shower, brushed your teeth, and changed into your spongebob sqarepants pj's and walked in your room and saw Patrick layin on tha bed watchin yo tv with kno shirt on lookin all comfortable in yo bed* ::excuse me wat are you doin in my bed::
Patrick-::I'm about to go to sleep::
Y/n-:;not on my bed you not:: *you walked ova to him and started tryin to drag him off the bed *
Patrick-*started to tickle you then you both started wrestlin with each otha on the bed* (nothin freaky 4 all yall thinkin negitive)
Y/n- *by this time you were on top of him still tryin to get him off the bed then you and him juss started kissin him*
Patrick-*you started makin out after a while then Patrick started to get on top of you and then he started to pull off your pajamas*
Y/n- * you stopped him by the time you were in nuthin but your under wear* :: I'm sorry but I can't not to night:: *you started thinkin about when Jeremy raped you*
Patrick-*he undee stood* ::thats ok:: *he layed flat layin his head on your chest*
Y/n- *you both started to fall to sleep when* ::I love you Patrick::
Patrick- *he'd heard that before when you were datin but for some reason thiz time seemed special like it wasn't just words* :: I love you 2 Y/n::
Both- *fell asleep just like that*
(ok thats the rest of ch 4 ima try to post ch5 part 2 2morrow its called life changin desision)
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Post by ~Mizz~Fizzle~SO~FLy05~ on Nov 8, 2005 0:42:21 GMT -5
awwwww bump it p
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Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 8, 2005 5:11:12 GMT -5
Bumpies!
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da1gezzie
b5 lover
U a!nt Fr?$h az!m!z
Posts: 98
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Post by da1gezzie on Nov 9, 2005 10:48:04 GMT -5
b*u*m*p*i*e*e*z ;D ;D ;D
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Post by lo26 on Nov 9, 2005 23:02:57 GMT -5
Y/n- *you both started to fall to sleep when* ::I love you Patrick::
Patrick- *he'd heard that before when you were datin but for some reason thiz time seemed special like it wasn't just words* :: I love you 2 Y/n::
Both- *fell asleep just like that*
Chapter 5 Part 2 Life changin decision (2 days lata)
Y/n- *you and Patrick had been all over each other the past two dayz yall weren't oficcially datin but yall were messin around a hella lot.... you and him were startin to get carried away and b4 you knew it you and him was at your house doin the do*
(but thiz chapter aint about you and pat)
Nairas POV
Naira- *was gettin dressed for you and Dustin's date, once you were dresssed you and went down stairs and waited 4 him*
ding dong
Naira-*walked over to the door opened it and saw Dustin in all of hiz fineness*
Dustin- *walked up to u and gave you a passionate kiss *
Naira-*you got so weak in tha knees you could hardly speak*::what was all that for::
Dustin-::cus I love you but you already kno that.... you ready to go::
Naira-::yea so where we goin::
Dustin-::you'll see:: *you and Dustin walked to his car he opened the door for you and you got in he was lookin all nervous*
Naira-:: d@#* why you lookin so nervous::
Dustin-::I'm not nervous *he got in the car and b4 yall knew it you were at his house*
Naira-*you knew hiz azz was lyin he had nervous written all over hiz face but more importantly you wanted to kno wtf was yall doin at his house but you aint say nothin*
Both-*got out the car and walked in Dustin's house you could tell from the silence kno one else was there*
Dustin-::umm Ima go up stairs real quick but wait for me in the dinin room::*he went upstairs*
Naira-*o....k you thought to yourself and you walked in the dinin room and omg that boy den cooked dinner*
Dustin-*walked in wit a smile on hiz face*
Naira-::Dustin do you feel ok:: *he must of been sick you didn't kno he could cook he wasnt even the type of person who would want to cook* ::I didn't kno you could cook
Dustin-::yea I can:: *I can do alot of things he thought to himself*
(after dinner)
Naira-*yuo was still tryna figure out wat was hiz problem he was lookin soo nervous but dinner sho was good you was suprised, you and Dustin sat on the couch but it was ackward he hadn't kissed you all this time and normally when yall alone he'd be all over you by now*
Dustin- *he kept lookin at u and then lookin away when you looked at him like some little crush or somethin*
Naira-:: iz there somethin I don't kno about cuss I want to kno wats been up wit u today::
Dustin-::nothin much:: *he grabbed your hand* ::I kno thiz iz weird and kinda all the sudden but Naira will you marry me::
Naira-*you were speachless and didn't kno what to say but some how you founds some words you said* :: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _::
(hehehe i couldn't give the rest away find out next time i post the next ch. 6 part 2 OMG)
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Post by ~Mizz~Fizzle~SO~FLy05~ on Nov 10, 2005 0:06:37 GMT -5
OMG BUMP IT SHE BETTAH SAY YEAH
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da1gezzie
b5 lover
U a!nt Fr?$h az!m!z
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Post by da1gezzie on Nov 10, 2005 1:44:17 GMT -5
b*u*m*p*i*e*e*z ;D ;D ;D b*u*m*p*i*e*e*z ;D ;D ;D b*u*m*p*i*e*e*z ;D ;D ;D b*u*m*p*i*e*e*z ;D ;D ;D b*u*m*p*i*e*e*z ;D ;D ;D b*u*m*p*i*e*e*z ;D ;D ;D
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Post by ktpzhomegrl on Nov 10, 2005 9:31:24 GMT -5
BUMPIEZ GIRL!
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Post by (:~Nicia~:) on Nov 10, 2005 14:29:59 GMT -5
OMG BUMP IT SHE BETTAH SAY YEAH That's what I'm saying! Bumpies!!
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Post by carnellcrazy on Nov 10, 2005 19:21:22 GMT -5
bump it up!!!!!!
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carnellssugar
new b5 fan
Carnels Sugar... not on his tounge just now...
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Post by carnellssugar on Nov 10, 2005 21:12:55 GMT -5
bump
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flygurl109
b5 lover
What are you looking at?
Posts: 97
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Post by flygurl109 on Nov 11, 2005 11:41:06 GMT -5
Gurl you can write a good story!I mean its really good!
Madd bumpz!
Reppin D*K*P*C*B to the fullest!
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Post by lightbrown5 on Nov 11, 2005 12:01:27 GMT -5
bump sorry i didnt bumpi lost dsa link!!
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Post by lightbrown5 on Nov 11, 2005 12:04:50 GMT -5
buummmmmmpp
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Post by dust1nspr1nc3zz on Nov 11, 2005 12:23:12 GMT -5
wWAT SHE SAY!!?!?!?!?!
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Post by poeticprbl on Nov 12, 2005 13:13:32 GMT -5
bump it up
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Post by lo26 on Nov 12, 2005 20:02:56 GMT -5
replay:
Dustin-::nothin much:: *he grabbed your hand* ::I kno thiz iz weird and kinda all the sudden but Naira will you marry me::
Naira-*you were speachless and didn't kno what to say but some how you founds some words you said* :: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _::
ch. 6 part 2 OMG
Naira-::are you serious:: *in an excited voice*
Dustin- ::very::
Naira-::of course I will omg::
Dustin-*he pulled out a dyamind ring and put it on your finger*
Naira-::omg omg omg::
Dustin-::how are we gonna tell everybody::
Naira-::well I kno that Rina, Carnell, Cat,Kelly,Pat,Bryan, and Karen said they'd be at Y/n's lata and it's about 10:20 so they should still be there::
Dustin-::iight lets go:: *yall both got up and walked toward the front door*
(an hour b4)
Y/n POV
Y/n- *you and Pat were still doin the do when all the sudden*
(ding dong)
Y/n- *hurried up and put some clothes on then casually went down stairs while Pat was still up stairs gettin dressed you opened the door*
Kelly-*walked in right past you like he owned the place followed by Rina, Bryan and Karen*
Cat and Canell- you could tell they had manners they actually waited for you to tell them to come in b4 they went in*
Patrick-*came from up stairs both of yall were lookin tired*
Kelly-*put 2 and 2 together and relized wat was goin on you hadn't told anyone you and Pat was back together so no one had even known that you were back to more then friends.....Kelly gave you one of those looks that say I know wat you been doin you little nasty*
E/b- *well everybody else musthave got it to cus right after Kelly gave you a look the first thing that came out of every body's mouth was* ::oooh wat was yall doin::
Y/n-*you blushed and tried to look all inicent then looked at Patrick who was tryin to hold in hiz smile*
Rina and Cat-*had you by both yo arms pullin you to your room*
Cat-*walked in and closed the door behind her* ::gurl how come you didn't tell us you and Pat was together again*
Y/n-*playin stupid* ::what are you talkin bout::
Rina-::why yall was comin from in here and it did take a while for yall to answer the door::
Y/n-::first of all we always watch tv in here::
Cat-::judgin by yo messy bed yo messy clothes and you look so tired Y/n why..... be cus you and Pat was sitin up here gettin yo freak on::
E/b-*started laughin*
Rina-::and don't even try to lie cus it smell like yall be doin somethin too::
Y/n-*started to laugh* ::ok....ok me and Pat was doin alittle somethin b4 yall so rudely interupted::
(5 min earlier)
Pats POV
Patrick-*came from up stairs both of yall were lookin tired*
Kelly-*put 2 and 2 together and relized wat was goin on you hadn't told anyone you and Pat was back together so no one had even known that you were back to more then friends.....Kelly gave Y/n one of those looks that say I know wat you been doin you little nasty*
E/b- *well everybody else must have got it to cus right after Kelly gave Y/n a look the first thing that came out of every body's mouth was* ::oooh wat was yall doin::
Y/n-*blushed and tried to look all inicent then looked at Patrick who was tryin to hold in hiz smile*
Rina and Cat-*had Y/n by both her arms pullin her to her room and they closed the door*'
Kelly-*cleared hiz thraoght* ::well Pat you've finally become a man::
Patrick-::I lost my virginity along time ago::
Kelly-*was surprised he didn't knwo that*::since when and how come I didnt kno about this::
Patrick-::yall dont know everything about me::
Kelly-::wat else are you hidin from us::
Patrick-::stuff that you wouldnt even begin to guess::
Kelly-::like wat::
Patrick-::liek none of yo business::
Kelly-*Kelly thought he knew every thing about hiz brothers it was kinda weird to find out that Patrick lost his virginity b4 Kelly*
(ok i'll write more 2morrow ch.6 part 2 omg continued)
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